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Will You Just Admit It Mr Bryar????
7 reviewsCar journeys, hotels and damn early flights and oh yes a whining Gerard.
2Exciting
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Deadlines
(#) Moonshyne 2008-07-27
I loved it!!
The teasing by the other guys and the heart to heart with Ray was great!!
Looking forward to more.Author's response
Thanks for reviewing again, i was kind of worried about this chapter so it's good to know you enjoyed it.
I'm guessing that there would be alot of teasing going on and general laughing at each others expense. There will definatley be loads more of that :)Deadlines
(#) xStabxMyxBackx 2008-07-27
i loved it too! ya know, you dont see many bob love stories...but i like this one a lot.
:)
xoxo
Niki FMAuthor's response
Hi Niki, thanks for taking the time to leave a review. It really helps to keep me going as this is my first story and i always think it's a load of crap so it's nice when people tell you definately.
I agree there should definatley be more Bob stories.Deadlines
(#) moonpig 2008-07-28
I agree i loved it too. The way you write them teasing each other is so funny and i love the way Frank responds. I agree with Moonshyne the conversation between Ray and Bob was really good. I can't wait to read more.Author's response
thank you for your review and i'm so pleased you liked the update. I'm so happy.
I messed up when i posted the chapter as i missed out letters, words and said Gerard leaned back his bed (he was in a car at the time) instead of his head. DumbDeadlines
(#) ChemicalEllen 2008-07-28
dito to all of the above!!!!
Your such a good writer!!
Update soon plz!
Luv
Ellen
xoxoxoAuthor's response
Thanks Ellen, i'm so happy you took the time to review. So pleased you are still enjoying it.Deadlines
(#) disturbedangel6 2008-07-28
lol i reallly love this shit.
please update sooon!
xxAuthor's response
ha ha, hope the shit continues to make you laugh. Cheers for taking the time to review. :)Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-08-02
thanks for updating. i have been away so just caught up.
i also love the interaction between the band mates. great update and can't wait for more!Author's response
Thank you so much, i really appreciate you taking the time to review.I've just posted an update so i hope you enjoy it.Deadlines
(#) PinkFairy 2008-08-30
Hi there, loving this story!!!
I look forward to your updates and I can picture the interactions between the band!!!
Keep it up.Author's response
Wow thank you so much. It means alot to me when people leave reviews. Just posted a new (kinda long) update today so i hope you like it :)
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