- Now this isn't shit...but I enjoy smothering..snickers...
Anyhows, I love everything about this fic! The truth is, I like the characters, the story line,,,though it shouldn't be set on high school though. it makes things complicated.
and you know, you are one of the most determined writers ever. you write so many fics and it made me admire you. i'm not kidding. it's true.
Please Carry on...
bring it on!
awww thanks xD
oh... sorry... i justkinda thought high school would be cool... lol
hahaha whoa... thanks i feel loved.. i'm having an emo day and you kind alighted it up xD
(#) dirtylittleliar 2008-08-15I know, you've written more since I've started reviewing, and I'll probably end up reviewing every chapter you've written, plus the ones you haven't written yet. I don't feel this is shit, I feel this has potential to become really really good shit, if not the BIG SHIT. And that is amazing. If I may critique, try to make your characters more "real". Try give them traits that allow your readers to connect with them more on a personal level. You're already halfway there, keep going!
i feel like your my eng teacher lol
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