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• Fantasy

  (#) never0kay 2008-07-29

  Now this isn't shit...but I enjoy smothering..snickers...
  
  Anyhows, I love everything about this fic! The truth is, I like the characters, the story line,,,though it shouldn't be set on high school though. it makes things complicated.
  
  and you know, you are one of the most determined writers ever. you write so many fics and it made me admire you. i'm not kidding. it's true.
  
  Please Carry on...

  Author's response

  hahaha
  bring it on!
  awww thanks xD
  oh... sorry... i justkinda thought high school would be cool... lol
  awww really?
  hahaha whoa... thanks i feel loved.. i'm having an emo day and you kind alighted it up xD
  
  
  
  xx

• Fantasy

  (#) DomHORROR 2008-07-29

  This is far from Shit!
  It's great!
  I wish I Could Write Fanfiction, But im not creative enough lol xD
  Please Dont stop this one becouse i think it rocks!

  Author's response

  awww
  thanks
  nah worth a try you know.
  aww thanks xD
  
  
  
  
  xx

• Fantasy

  (#) xXi_luv_gerardXx 2008-07-29

  omg. i love it so much! haha

  Author's response

  naww thanks
  i love you so much xD
  
  
  xx

• Fantasy

  (#) dirtylittleliar 2008-08-15

  I know, you've written more since I've started reviewing, and I'll probably end up reviewing every chapter you've written, plus the ones you haven't written yet. I don't feel this is shit, I feel this has potential to become really really good shit, if not the BIG SHIT. And that is amazing. If I may critique, try to make your characters more "real". Try give them traits that allow your readers to connect with them more on a personal level. You're already halfway there, keep going!

  Author's response

  hmmmmmmm
  i feel like your my eng teacher lol
  thanks

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