Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Awake
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Awake
(#) XxkelseyxX 2008-08-05
wow, what the fuck are you reading my story for?
it crap compared to this.
i can't write worth shit.
hahah
this is really god tho, seriously.
i'm glad i took the time to read itAwake
(#) luvsyou22 2008-08-21
Hehehe so it's NOT finished yet...woot. Now I'm caught up and can read the rest along with everyone else...
This story is intriguiging (I doubt I spelled that right..), and I can't wait to read more. xD I love confusing dreams too. I'm always trying to figure out what they mean...the one she just had was somewhat obvious tho. I think...
I loved this line: "Didn’t he know that curiosity didn’t just kill the cat? It lured it in, confusing, lying and betraying it, dragging it along into a cruel world of deceit where suffering is just the name of the game. The cat never saw it coming." Haha never heard anyone actually elaborate on that phrase. Very nice. :D
Update soon, cause I wanna see what happens. xD
Author's response
Thank you so much for your reviews!
They made me smile and I really appreciate them.
It's funny because I always have dreams like Kaelin's - I guess I just sort of elaborated mine to create hers. haha
That sounds creepy.
I'm glad you liked that line, it's one of my absolute favorites. I didn't think that curiosity killed the cat was truthful enough, I mean, is death really that bad if that's all that happens? Hardly. There needs to be some torture in there to ensure that people don't repeat the actions.
Again, that sounds creepy.
Sorry. haha
Again, thanks for the review!
Cheers
Kat
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