(#) Anonymus31 2008-08-15It was interesting. you've got an excellent mind for humor, you might want to add that to the genre's list.
There were a few spelling and grammar issues, but not enough to make it unreadable.
So is this just a oneshot, or will there be more chapters forthcoming? Either way it was enjoyable
Author's responsethis one was a oneshot
the idea was to work out some kinks in my writing style as i work on 3 other pieces.
one of the other pieces im working on is posted here and is yet another exercise in a different writing style
the other two are not posted yet and are both being planned out in my normal style one is a HP fic and the other is original
the spelling is likely all screwed up because in neither American or British but spent equal parts of my younger years in Australia, the USA and the UK add to that a nasty case of Dyslexia and you get a really screwed up spelling ethos and vocab not to mention a SOH that is far to bizarre for words
anywho thanks for the comment
- Not a bad story mate, I like Hermione thoughts but Harry's eyes. Nice. I like Harry's and Hermione's thoughts for each other... cool.
I like what their friends were goint to do to get them to see the light, as they put it. I like how Harry just asked Hermmione to Marry him like that. And how Harry reacted to when she said yes, nice done there mate, I like it.
- Fun Story! I do thing McGonagall is SLIGHTLY underestimating the appropriate distance to be from them when they find out about the love potion had they been dosed. I would not want to be in the same Multiverse as them. Harry may be beyond powerful but I would much rather have him after me than Hermione. She is SCARY!!!
Author's responseno no love potions at all here ... while Molly does want to see her children happyu she fully consideres bothe harry and Hermione to be as close to family as they could be ... she will be disappointed about their choice as will Ginny and very confused by their relationship when she eventually finds out (needless to say that none of her immediate family have ever been involved in the subculture) but in the end as a good person she will accept that they are happy and thats all she wants ...
Ginny and Ron either Will or are in the process of growing up and as part of thast comes an understanding that dreams are just that ... tho Ron has Luna and you can bet that she will keep him well in line and satisfied
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