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Elementary Calculations
(#) animemonster 2008-08-22
You keep getting better and better, I'm reminded severely of Artemis Fowl in Harry's behavior and mannerisms. I really want to see how Albus acts in the next chapter. To tell the truth, I had forgotten about the shield on the Dursley's house. Hmm... I could see Voldemort ruling the wizarding world and Harry ruling the muggle world.Elementary Calculations
(#) hlestea 2008-08-23
Excellent chapter, I love Harry's interactions with Voldemort. Sirius being kind of a cry-baby is a bit annoying; I hope he is able to realize that Harry may never be the person Sirius wants him to be.Elementary Calculations
(#) MonCappy 2008-08-23
It will be interesting to see how Harry will neutralize the threat Hermione poses. While I can understand her desire for a friend, I think it is despicable of Albus how he would so callously use her. It will be interesting to see how Harry unravels the manipulations around the poor girl.
She has the capacity to be a true friend if Harry can get her out of the Great Manipulator's control. What I find most interesting is how Dumbledore has placed Harry in a situation that has made him view Voldemort in neutral terms. He has essentially made them if not allies, at least neutral parties to each other. All in the name of his vision of the greater good.Elementary Calculations
(#) alec_potter 2008-08-23
Nice chapter. The comversation between Harry-voldermort was enlighting. Hermione is one of my fav characters, so am disappointed in how she is turning out. Well hoping that you have somthing good in store for her in future. Great going so far. Keep updating. ATB.Elementary Calculations
(#) banner 2008-08-24
Nice setdown for Draco. It's weird seeing such a congenial relationship between Harry and Voldemort, but I'm getting used to it.
Harry was a little rude to Lupin - illness is generally a subject to be raised by the sufferer, not an observer. It's generally a sensitive issue. The conversation stands out because Harry had just mentioned the importance of good manners.
Great chapter, as always. Your version of smart Harry is terrific.Author's response
The way that he raised the question of Lupin's illness actually made me hesitate for a moment, but it is in keeping with his character. Right now Lupin is not quite a person to him, he's a curiosity and something to be studied.Elementary Calculations
(#) sparky40sw 2008-09-21
I had to re-read several chapters to be comfortable at the beginning of this one, and was once again impressed at how well you have re-written the story and character of Harry in such a logical and interesting way. I have enjoyed it very much.
thanks for sharingElementary Calculations
(#) tommyr 2008-09-24
I like the smart, darker Harry that takes no guff. His talks with Tom add interest as well as his clear perception of others and situations. The way he dealt with Severus is still one of my all time favorites. Sirius trying to figure Harry out will be amusing. Hermione's "need to know" attitude is very irritating. I applaud Harry's thoughts on ways to "cure" her of it being directed towards him.Elementary Calculations
(#) fanofkali 2008-09-27
Great story.
The Voldemort / Harry conversations are really funny. The Happy Christmas thing had me laughing for a while.
Dumbledork freaking out in the next chapter is going to be awesome.
Have to agree with other reviewers especially Cateagle.
Looking forward to more!Elementary Calculations
(#) banner 2008-11-29
I just reread this story, and I enjoyed it so much! I hope your muse leads you back to this one.
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