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The Mount Moon Escapades continue
2 reviewsJosie fights Team Rocket, but something happens outside too. Cameo characters which create Pokemon Chronicles spoilers.
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A Trainer's Journey
(#) Camera_Doesnt_Lie 2006-03-10
Not bad so far. I'd like to see a little more of her as a person and a little less as a trainer, if you follow. If not, feel free to contact me via e-mail and I'll explain.
Author\'s Response: Thank you for the review. I think I follow what you mean, I have been focusing overly on my character as a trainer than her as herself. I've been adding the quirks of her personality, but I guess that's not enough. Still this is a learning experience I think I'll start adapting my story in the next couple of chapters. We'll see how it goes. TBH I've been ill the last few days, this reviews given me something to think about to get this story going again. I should thank you really :D.A Trainer's Journey
(#) IWCT 2006-04-17
"At the rate they're going through the next issue of Pokemon Monthly will be out before they are."
Heh, only too true. However, I like the pace this is going at. It's like a better version of the anime, and thank goodness the only getting lost people are doing is at the pokemart, lol.
Can't wait for what's coming next. Now, 'tis late atr night for me, so I must leave your lovelyful story for now. Go chase some tigers!
=^.^= If Walls Could Talk
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