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• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-08-31

  Lol - brilliant Neve. I loved this update and the tension betwen Jill and Bob has been built up so well. I really like the humour you put in it.
  
  Favourite line was "and well I am after all me"
  
  I feel selfish for asking but please update soon. Can't wait to see how Ruth reacts around Frank.

  Author's response

  Thanks so much, you know i was worried about it being a bit long but i'm glad i made you laugh :)
  
  I'm dedicating the future Frank/Ruth moment to Moonshyne since she was the inspiration for it :) Got to go and put it into words now.

• Deadlines

  (#) x-The-Black-Parade-x 2008-08-31

  wow, I love this story
  I was almost crying when I was reading the bit about sharing bunks
  lol good job =]
  update soon?
  xxx

  Author's response

  Thank you, i'm so pleased people get my humour. I couldn't help myself at the bunk sharing bit so i'm glad it wasn't too cheesy. I had Gerard taking the piss out of himself since alot people think he's arrogant.
  
  Glad you like it :)

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-08-31

  Wow! fab update! i used to live in Bournemouth!! Good description of the BIC!! i love how you are writing this based on real events time wise!!
  
  and i love how you are writing the humour into this story! i love frankie to bits! i love how you get a bit of Gerard the diva in there! Bob is coming into his own, bless him, atleast he admits he has feelings for Jill! More soon pretty please!

  Author's response

  You know i was bit worried about describing the BIC encase someone lived there so i'm glad i didn't insult anyone.
  
  I know i've said this before but i LOVE writing Frank. I have ideas for a really dark Frank story but it'll need to wait cause this one has so much more to go.
  
  Thank for your lovely review

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-08-31

  I was so excited to see a new update!!
  
  I loved it especially the sharing of the bunks bit. Poor Jill was a nervous wreck about the prospect of having to share a bunk with Bob. (Who wouldn't be, but I bet he gives great hugs.)
  
  It was so sweet the moments between Ray and Jill too.
  
  Can't wait for London. will be looking forward to the update!!
  
  
  

  Author's response

  Thank you so much. You know i feel a Bob hugging moment comment coming up soon - ha ha.
  
  I will try to post as soon as i can.

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