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• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-09-06

  I loved the chapter and how they decided to get to know each other better.
  
  I'm curious whether it was just a deranged fan or someone else thar sent the e-mail. Or am I just over reading it??
  
  I also wanted to say I hate you (only kidding) because I wanted them to kiss so badly. One small goodnight take care kiss.
  
  But alas another time.
  
  I was so excited when I saw the new chapter and can't wait to read more!!

  Author's response

  Lol, kinda cruel eh?
  
  Thanks for leaving such a nice review and i'm so happy you liked it. Nothing gives you a boast more than seeing that people have taken the time to review.
  
  I think you may like the next one :) ahem must not give away plot.
  
  i mean't to say boost not boast (looks so bad) Also the e-mail is significant but in the future.

• Deadlines

  (#) Mrs_Stump221 2008-09-06

  I love the chapter, the fact that they are getting to know eachother better is awesome too.
  
  I am wondering who sent that e mail??? (??????) ooooo
  
  the timing was perfect and i guess they will kiss all in good time hum....oh wellz, i am off to visit my boyfriend
  
  ciao!
  
  

  Author's response

  Hey thanks for reviewing, i'm glad you liked it and it looks like Bob and Jill have made a breakthrough (mmm - lots of drama ahead i think)

• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-09-06

  Thank you so much for posting, brilliant chapter and you make me laugh, cry and then become so frustrated because like Moonshyne i was thinking "they're gonna finally kiss," but no "goddammit".
  
  I love the way this story is going.

  Author's response

  I know, maybe i was a bit nasty but i didn't feel it felt right.
  
  So much to happen and i just hope you guys stick with it and you like it. My next update is almost done, i swear i get no sleep.

• Deadlines

  (#) Dondon1827 2008-09-06

  I just marathon read this story and I love it! Like I literally want to marry this story!!
  
  It is so cute the whole Jill and Bob thing ^_^
  
  It must be a good story If Moonshyne is reading AND reviewing it :P
  And I agree with her I wanted them too kisssss!
  
  Cant wait for an update :D
  
  Dondon x

  Author's response

  Wow, thank you.
  
  I totally agree and i am truly honoured that such amazing writers are reading my stories and leaving reviews. Everytime i get a review it spurs me on to do even better.
  
  i hope you like my next update, i;m nervous when i post.

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-09-06

  I LOVE IT....MORE!

  Author's response

  Thank you, i hope to post tomorrow :)

• Deadlines

  (#) frankiegrhey 2008-09-06

  awwh.
  thats too cute.
  it like hurts.
  
  love this story, like loads.
  
  xoxo
  nessa

  Author's response

  Yeah, i'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story. Thank you for leaving such a lovely review.

• Deadlines

  (#) moviemaniac888 2008-09-06

  AWW how could someone be mean to Jill! that makes me angry.
  
  another great chapter. Loved Ruth's response to meeting Frank! haha.
  
  I like the build up in Jill and Bob's relationship.
  
  ...and was that song you used Westlife? ha ha. I haven't heard that song in FOREVER.
  
  great job. as always.
  
  can't wait for the next chapter!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much.
  
  I'm glad you like my story it means so much to know other people are enjoying it.
  
  You freaked me out a bit mentioning Westlife as they are mentioned in my next chapter. The song is Extreme, not sure if Westlife covered that.

• Deadlines

  (#) disturbedangel6 2008-09-07

  Yayayayayay!
  This is so cute!
  Lol
  I like the fact that everything isnt moving fast lol
  Thats cool.
  Please update soon!
  
  
  xx

  Author's response

  Thank you, i'm so pleased you're still liking it. I just posted a new update just now - ahhhh i hope you like it :)

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-09-08

  Wow this is just getting better and better. poor Jill re the email. interesting where that will go in the future. i love how you put subtle bits in like Mikey not being so comfortable and Gerard being a bit paranoid. it makes it very real.
  
  i am totally loving how you are writing Frank, he is damn adorable! and i smile when i read your little Gerard bits like him doing his hair! haha! Ray is as you would expect, a sweetie. and Bob god bless him. i can't wait for their relationship to pick up!
  
  oh and Ruth and Justin also. i love that Justin pretends not to like MCR!! he loves them really! haha! and Ruth checking out Frankie's ass! too funny
  
  right well thanks very much. can't wait for more!
  
  also i will be keeping an eye out for your darker Frankie story in the future!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much for leaving such a great review.
  
  I'm so happy that you noticed the bits about Mikey and Gerard. I have this whole parallel idea in my head about the Mikey thing but it might get to much. I might do a separate story but then i have this Frank idea too. God i'll have no life lol.
  
  I'm so happy that you like the way i'm writing the guys, it's so difficult and if i'm even a tiny bit close i'll be happy.
  
  Ruth and Justin will come back into much more i promise. Jill's going have so much to tell them and so much to keep secret.
  
  I can't resist putting Frank moments in there and i hope you like the Jill and Frank interaction at the end the new chapter.
  
  I think i need to shut up now before i give too much away :)

• Deadlines

  (#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-02

  This was a great chapter too! You've really got the interaction between all the guys down. Feels like you're right there. And I love how you've developed all the other characters. =D

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, that's such a fab review and to say you like the interactions and the way the characters are developing is brilliant.

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