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Fawkes
16 reviewsChaos theory; a nargle flaps its wings in China, and Luna responds differently to Harry during their conversation before the leaving feast.. AU starting near the end of OoTP. Harry/Luna/Hermione. N...
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Thoughts of Pudding
(#) animemonster 2008-09-06
FAWKES!!! I'm glad Harry cares more about the phoenix than Dumbledore. huggles Fawkes he needs it. So does the training start tomorrow?Thoughts of Pudding
(#) kruen 2008-09-07
Like how it's going. Can't believe he left Fawkes like that. Poor Fawkes. Really like stories when Fawkes becomes Harry's Familiar.
Or should that be Harry becomes Fawkes's Familiar. LOLThoughts of Pudding
(#) slashslut 2008-09-07
i have to say that the bits with fawkes were my favorite of the whole chapter. im dying to know what caused him to leave dumbles and transfer allegiance to harry. ive seen/read this in other stories but it's usually pretty straightforward as to why. and if there's one thing your story isn't is straightforward (and i mean that in a good way!) im also really curious about how dumbles will react to the rejection (though im sure he will learn nothing from it)Thoughts of Pudding
(#) Wolfric 2008-09-07
I enjoyed the chapter. I would think that a three way relationship would be way to confusing for poor Harry, he can't seem to handle a two person relationship all that well; of course every body is a bit uncertain the first time. Thanks for writing. W.Thoughts of Pudding
(#) JohnWeasly 2008-09-15
I was hoping this would not be another Harry / Hermione story.
Some nice twists so far so I guess I will wait and see.Thoughts of Pudding
(#) Keldin 2009-05-17
I found myself worrying about Fawkes halfway through this chapter, but thinking 'oh, now that Harry has him, he should be fine.' Excellent!
The only real issue I have here is the same one I usually have in stories where a phoenix becomes attached to Harry - and that's that Hedwig still needs to get attention too. Lots of people solve this by turning Hedwig into a phoenix (usually a white one), but I think it's more interesting if he has competing loyalties. Since you've already got a bit of that (in the Harry vs Hermione vs Luna thing), it should be interesting to see where you go with this.
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