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• Deadlines

  (#) Dondon1827 2008-09-08

  This was so lovely :)
  
  Im so glad they kissed, and Hahahaha!! Frank bless him. Trying to act all macho.
  
  I would love to rate this chapter but Im a nerd and I dunno how to rate :(
  
  Respond to this telling me how and I will be happy too :D
  
  Dondon x

  Author's response

  yeee, you liked my update and i'm so happy. Don't worry about rating, the fact you left a review is just brilliant. Thank you :)

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-09-08

  wow another great update! there must be so much going through your mind when you are thinking about and writing this. so many little pieces. i understand that it is hard to get everything in there but you are doing a great job at portraying the characters. but as long as you remember, a story can be as long as you want it (within reason i guess) but there is no hurry. (not that you are hurrying, you are at perfect pace) but i know that feeling that you want all your ideas out there as quick as possible. it's quite mad isn't it?!
  
  anyway thank you for updating. so pleased Bob and Jill have made first base!! interesting to see what is going on in Gerard's life with his woman.
  
  oh and i loved the last part with Frankie and Jill!
  
  excellent!
  
  

  Author's response

  Thank you SO much and i love your advice. My head is just full of ideas to the point i have notes all over the place - bit sad really.
  
  I so wanted them to kiss but i held back for so long and i was worried trying to put it into words.
  
  I must stop putting in little side stories or this will be a monster but Gerard is just too interesting to ignore and it does have an impact on the story.
  
  Again i just can't help writing Frank bits, no fun without Frankie :)

• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-09-08

  "Right then Iero, get them off."
  
  ha ha lol, i loved it.
  
  That was such a good update and i totally agree with lacerationgravity and Dondon. You are doing such an amazing job and i jump for joy when i see an update.

  Author's response

  he he, i was finishing up this chapter and then i had a frank idea, at first i thought it was lame but you liked it so i must have got it right. Thanks for reviewing :)

• Deadlines

  (#) Dondon1827 2008-09-08

  I found it, I have rated :D
  
  Dondon x

  Author's response

  Aww you are too nice (sending a huge virtual hug) Thank you :)

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-09-08

  Hey there,
  
  I totally agree with Dondon, lacerationgravity and moonpig. I love this story to death. I too get excited when I see and update.
  
  They kissed yay!!!
  
  OMG that was too funny with Frank roflmao!!
  
  It was a really great chapter.
  
  I find I get writing and have something set in mind and start to get wordy because you're like wouldn't this be cool!!
  
  I know that feeling all too well.
  
  But you really are doing a great job!!
  
  

  Author's response

  I'm not kidding i could cry. You know when you feel you're crap at everything and then you do something like this and get such an amazing response from people. I know i say this alot but when people leave reviews it's such an awesome thing. Thank you so much.

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-09-08

  I LOVED IT....THEY KISSED YAY!.....MORE!

  Author's response

  LOL, you are so demanding :)
  Thanks for taking the time to review and i promise to post soon.

• Deadlines

  (#) moviemaniac888 2008-09-08

  LOVED IT!
  
  I think it was great. all of it. and Jill made Frank speechless!!! haha.
  
  ...and that was really twilight zone how I said Westlife and then they were in this chapter!!! I looked it up and Westlife did cover the Extreme song. how coincidental.
  
  Great job. Keep up the great updates.

  Author's response

  Oh no, that's sacrilage. I can't help but hate Westlife - yuch.
  
  Thnak you for reviewing, when you mentioned Westlife before i was thinking you could read my mind - kinda scary and it made me laugh. :)

• Deadlines

  (#) Medusa 2008-09-10

  I love this story :D
  
  Not very often that theres a Bob story but this one is great
  
  keep up the good work and keep Bob and Jill kissing :D:D:D
  
  

  Author's response

  Thank you so much i'm so pleased you like the story. There's simply not enough Bob stories. I'm trying to make sure i have snippets of all the guys in there to keep everyone happy.
  
  Thank you for taking the time to review, means alot to me :)
  
  Holy hell MCR just appeared on my tv - he he now i'm distracted :)

• Deadlines

  (#) Mrs_Stump221 2008-09-10

  
  awww its so cute i luuuuuvvv it lol Keeep going!

  Author's response

  I'm really trying to get writing but i've had no time whatsoever and it sucks. I will hopefully get something posted by the weekend. Thanks for reviewing :)

• Deadlines

  (#) catlover070904 2008-09-11

  '"Look Gee she ends with at least they stand for something. And better a Chemical Romance than a Westlife one. Westlife, who the fuck are they?" Frank asked turning his attention to Jill.
  
  Jill took a deep breath, "They're, how can I put this, a very bland boy-band, they don't play any instruments kinda like Backstreet Boys but without the talent and that's saying something."'
  
  
  Lol I LOVED this bit, so funny, especially since I was (and still a smigen am) a die hard Westlife fan but now would rather listen to MCR than them lol.

  Author's response

  Lol, glad you liked it. I couldn't think of any other way to describe them. he he
  
  I'm seriously weirding myself out because this is the second time i've gone to respond to a review and MCR have appeared on my tv (i'm watching kerrang) same video - teenagers. It's like a hint - finish writing the next chapter you lazy git.

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