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Order Invasion
17 reviewsDumbledore wants Ami back under his control. However, he'll have to go through, CyberTech and Kyte first. The Order of the Phoenix attacks, CyberTech fights back.
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CyberTech
(#) captuniv 2008-09-11
Awesome chapter! You do realize that Kyte now has the ultimate blackmail, a recording of the so-called Light Lord Dumbledore threatening to kill someone to get what he wants? Up ship creek boyo! Can't wait to see what the outcome of this will be to the Order. Especially if someone leaks that info. So what is the Ministry's stance on all this as well as the fallout? Update soon!Author's response
I know, thank you... but there wont be no blackmail... yet, evil chuckle. Thanks for the review, glad ya liking the story.CyberTech
(#) apocalypse_thou 2008-09-11
It's a good story. Fucked up... yes, but entertaining non the less.
Keep it up.CyberTech
(#) ShidoTakashima 2008-09-12
this is an awsome story!!! very captivating and full of surprises. i must admit though that the pairing is shocking but not in that bad of a way since you factored LOVE in the mix....
i wish apon you a bounty of insperation and plenty more reviews
-ShidoCyberTech
(#) Seelvor 2008-09-12
I agree with Cateagle: there are a few small typographical problems with this story that a beta would clear up for you.
It's entertaining, and as I was reading this chapter, I kept thinking; "this is cool..." I kept thinking about the variations you could have (Hermione instead of Ginny etc) and others.
I have to say, Iron Man Harry Potter (which is the basic gist I got from this story) is a concept I've not read before. I've seen Batman, Dresden Files, Devil May Cry... but never Iron Man. I look forward to more.
One other thing: according to the site, there are SEVEN chapters to this story, but I can only find six. Where the hell's the other one?Author's response
Nauh, there is only six chapters up at the moment. I have no idea why I would say seven, problby just a glitch with the site, I have noticed a few myself.
Well anyway, thanks for the review. I know I could do with agood beta for the few typoes, and grammar. However, I've been through 5 already, and they all let me down.
Well as for having Hermione instead of Ginny in the pairing... well first I'm not a fan of Harry/Hermione, and second I wanted Ginny for Ami's best friend and secret lover because they are a lot more simular, plus Ami saved Ginny's life, which brought them closer together.
Haha... I also haven't read any Harry Potter/ Iron Man Xovers.
Well I'm glad you've enjoyed it, I'll stop blabbering now, lol!CyberTech
(#) momocolady 2008-09-27
I is a good story, I like it so far. I can't wait to read the next chapters.
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