Harry, born half Devil... Rose, his twin, born half Angel. Harry vanquished Voldemort, and Lily lied, saying he died, giving him to Sirius and Remus, before James and Dumbledore murder the inocent ...
(#) LDA 2008-09-12
Not bad, I hope next chapter we get to see where his sister is at and how Lily coped with James and Dumbles.
I have to plead with you a little here too, please please don't hook Harry up with a hogwarts girl that is from canon, have Ginny killed in a fantasticly bloody and painful way for shits n giggles...
Hehe. I don't know about killing Ginny off. though, its still to early to see where the muses take me. As for pairings, I'm not sure I'm going to have any, though I'll probably throw in a bit of smut, just because everyone likes smut, lol! Thanks for the review, and don't worry, loads of people will die gory deaths, lol! Just have to see who and how, as I write and future ideas hit me.
Definitely an interesting and attention-catching start to a story with a different and interesting premise. The only drawbacks are spelling/homonym errors that hurt the flow of the story.
this is a cool idea i cant wait for chapter two
A every good start to the story, i'll be waiting for more =)
I really liked it.
You should definitally write more!
wheres the rest? i want to see how you do the DMC/HP thing! you started it very well. i want MORE!!!
i love the story PLEASE continue. I think a good paring would be Harry/Hermionie or Harry/OC
Please 'cause I'm hooked. I think Harry/Daphne or Harry/OC pairings for this story. Are you gonna give Harry a shotgun or similar stuff from DMC
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