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• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-09-16

  Hi there Neve,
  
  I'm shocked I'm the first to review. I love this story so much and so excited seeing an update.
  
  I really love how sweet Bob was to her when she fell out of bed and he covered her.
  
  I just can't get enough of them.
  
  You can really feel that Bob felt so empty in the last part when he had to let her go.
  
  I can't wait for more, but take your time.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much and i really appreciate the fact that you always review.
  
  I always picture Bob as being the protective type. I'm probably totally wrong, lol.

• Deadlines

  (#) Dondon1827 2008-09-16

  deep breath
  AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
  
  Bob and Jill are so effin cute together.
  
  I love this story and the updates are always great :D
  
  Cant wait for more
  
  Dondon x

  Author's response

  Thanks so much Dondon, I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
  
  The next update is a tiny far-fetched (as if they would really go on a road trip - mind you, you never know) but i need it for my story. Hopefully i can post soon :)

• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-09-16

  Hurrah an update and i agree with moonshyne please don't feel you have rush out updates and stress yourself out.
  
  I love your updates and Bob and Jill are so believable. I love the little exchanges they have. How do you come up with the ideas?
  
  I'm loving the snippets of what's happening with Mikey and Gerard.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much. I love writing this story but at times it's hard to fit it in with all the other stuff going on so i really appreciate your comments.

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-09-16

  Oh thank you for updating!
  
  i am so loving this story. i love Bob and Jill together. he is such a gentle soul and so genuine and caring.
  
  also love the snippets of Gerard and his relationship, and Frankie's response to that!
  
  and bless Mikey! Thanks for those added extras, it is interesting to see what's going on on the sidelines.
  
  don't stress yourself over anything to do with this story cos there is no need.
  
  thank for all your author's responses also. i look forward to reading those too!

  Author's response

  Wow thank you. I'm so pleased people believe in Jill and Bob. Things won't always be so sweet. I kind of figure him to be really nice under that tough guy image.
  
  Thank you so much for being so kind, i think i'm addicted to writing this because i just can't seem to stop at the moment.
  
  I love reading the reviews people leave too, gives me a good kick to keep going :)

• Deadlines

  (#) cupcakeloserrainbow 2008-09-16

  I always hate it when i get to the end of your chapters and i just want to keep reading! RAWR! post post post pwease!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, i will hopefully post again soon.

• Deadlines

  (#) moviemaniac888 2008-09-16

  1. Love this story.
  
  2. You have nothing to be worried about. great as always. Don't stress, anything you write we will willingly read.
  
  3. I loved how you had that little part where you had Jill studying Mikey's actions and relating it to the whole depression thing. I like it when Jill observes them.
  
  4. Cannot wait for the road trip and Jill's Dad!!! It is going to be awesome.
  
  please update soon. I cannot get enough of this story.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing :)
  
  I love writing the guys and Mikey is just too interesting to ignore :)
  
  I think Jill's Dad is a bit nutty so hopefully i can get some humourous bits going on with him.
  
  I promise to post soon :)

• Deadlines

  (#) PinkFairy 2008-09-17

  Hope you update soon, this is a good story and I get som excited when you post!!!
  
  It was a good chapter, I think the next one will be better as then instead of the build up, you will actually have the main event going on.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much, you do get to find out alot more about Jill in the next chapter. Plus hopefully lots of humour.

• Deadlines

  (#) disturbedangel6 2008-09-17

  Omg so coool!
  I reallly love it!
  Its so cute!
  Update soon!
  
  Xx

  Author's response

  Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for taking the time to review.

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-09-17

  Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was sooooooooooooo sweet.....i loved it...Great chapter...can't wait for more!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much :)

• Deadlines

  (#) Mrs_Stump221 2008-09-17

  Awe its so cute!!! I love itttt!!!!

  Author's response

  Thanks for reviewing, I'm so happy you are enjoying the story :)

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