- Bad news about the foot! :( I guess, keep it raised and relax.
Great chapter though! Short but plenty going on and things that I'm sure will crop up again later.
Love your use of foreshadowing - great to see people writing without giving everything away in the first chapter!
Love it - more soon??
Take care of that foot!
- u broke ur foot!?!?! :( im sry!!! :( givs u mcr and umbrella academy stuffs lol this is really funny cuz i did the same thing gee did wif his computer!!! lol yea i kno im really geetarded...lol....i luv it!!!!!! cant wait 4 tha next update!!!!! and ijust had coffee so the world better look out!!!!lol
luvs cassidy.... :)
(#) XxCRYSTALLINExX 2009-07-20I actually jumped out of a second floor window once... Long story short, my brother was chasing me with a golf club :) I didn't break anything though, unless you count my nail (OMG! How can I go on?!) Actually, thinking about it, You posted that like 10 months ago, so you're probably fixed by now, but... GET BETTER SOON!
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