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immortal Fangs
(#) Destroyerdrt 2008-09-02
Great story hope that you will update some of your other stories that are just has good.immortal Fangs
(#) drago717 2008-09-02
very interesting ...
hope you continue this. so far it's very goodimmortal Fangs
(#) DaphneGreengrass 2008-09-02
like the idea you are working with, but think the writing style does not do it justice.immortal Fangs
(#) Mcmllnchrstn 2008-09-02
Very good please update soon and so Siri and Amerlia(sp)are together or what.Author's response
Yes Sirius and Amelia are dating. Not married or anything. But they are dating. Oh and in this fic Amelia is a huff who was in third year when the boys and Lily where in first year. Not Mama Lion's ageimmortal Fangs
(#) DonPJuan 2008-09-02
hey do you think you could work in a bit of Blood Rayne, perhaps have her fall for a older Harry and/or you could even mix in a bit of Hellsing and have Seras/Ceres/or whatever her name is fall for Harry as well and find some way for her to become a dhampier from a vampire and of course Alucard could go for Lily. Hmmm...... also that girl that was turned in Hellsing that lived in the library Helena I think her name was could aged further than she is with Harry's or Lily's help as I never did like the idea of such a smal child being a vampire, you could even work it in where she gets adopted by lily and/or gain some type of magic from feeding from either Lily or Harry. With a crazy setup like that you could also have the Potter's aligned with Hellsing till all their trouble is over then have Hellsing help the Potter's out with MoldyShorts I mean can you imagine Alucard, Harry, The Weasley Twin's, Sirius and Lupin at Hogwarts can anyone say one hell of a prank war LOL pardon the pun but you could have them drive Dumbledork batty quite literally.immortal Fangs
(#) DonPJuan 2008-09-02
hey do you think you could work in a bit of Blood Rayne, perhaps have her fall for a older Harry and/or you could even mix in a bit of Hellsing and have Seras/Ceres/or whatever her name is fall for Harry as well and find some way for her to become a dhampier from a vampire and of course Alucard could go for Lily. Hmmm...... also that girl that was turned in Hellsing that lived in the library Helena I think her name was could aged further than she is with Harry's or Lily's help as I never did like the idea of such a smal child being a vampire, you could even work it in where she gets adopted by lily and/or gain some type of magic from feeding from either Lily or Harry. With a crazy setup like that you could also have the Potter's aligned with Hellsing till all their trouble is over then have Hellsing help the Potter's out with MoldyShorts I mean can you imagine Alucard, Harry, The Weasley Twin's, Sirius and Lupin at Hogwarts can anyone say one hell of a prank war LOL pardon the pun but you could have them drive Dumbledork batty quite literally.Author's response
I am not sure about Hellsing. Its a huge story to work with on a xover. Though Rayne becoming a Dhampire like Harry could be interesting if I can't work out which canon girl I want to be a born Dhampire. Was thinking Tracy or Daphne.
Not sure yet. Would love to hear opinions on who to make the matchup for Harry btwimmortal Fangs
(#) Shadowdrake 2008-09-03
Very interesting idea. I'd very much like to see this idea continued.
That said, it doesn't read very well. I'd recommend that you take another look at this chapter; it has the potential to be a great story.immortal Fangs
(#) alkeria7089 2008-09-03
Interesting start. Are you going for super Harry? If not, if will be interesting to see how you balance things out.
I think it was too simple that Dumbledore just allow himself to be arrested like that. He was a very powerfull wizard. What was he charged?
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