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immortal Fangs
(#) angyelsglaive 2008-09-03
Interesting premise. You definately need a Beta that will enforce punctuation upon you, Puck, your phrasing needs some cleaning up in that department. I like it, but not as much as your last entry on here.immortal Fangs
(#) zicou 2008-09-04
That sounds great !
Hope to see the next soon!
Continuuuuuuue!
Z.immortal Fangs
(#) Ryusuken 2008-09-04
Well, if you wanna some imputs about Harry's match up: Hermione comes to my mind emmediatelly (I am H&Hrs big fan...) but having her as an underling (a la Ceres Victoria, but crazy in love/lust with Harry would be nice also). Tracy and Daphne are great togheter, and would be cool to see them both as Harry's dampir duo lovers as well. Anyway this seens a nice fic with some new vampir/dhampir concepts I find quite interesting. So, post more on this universe of yours as well as the other one where Hermione wakes a dead Harry with a kiss...that one promises just as much as this one.immortal Fangs
(#) Silvanis 2008-09-04
Very very interesting. The spin you put on it is very well done. I like what you did to Dumbledore. Never liked him anyway. Keep up the good work.immortal Fangs
(#) DonPJuan 2008-09-04
want a good twist on the Dumbledork thing then just have him turn out to be Grindlewald or have him turned into some kinda Demon possessed creature that can mask his presense from everyoneimmortal Fangs
(#) DonPJuan 2008-09-04
or..... you could even have Dumbledork behind the whole freak chip thing that Hellsing is going on about as some sick and twisted way to extend his life beyond what is possible and have all the previous freak chips as a sort of beta test to see if they'll work and to iron out the flaws in the process.immortal Fangs
(#) DonPJuan 2008-09-05
Tonks as a Dhampire has interesting possibilities though I could care less as to who pairs up with Harry as long as it's pug face parkinson or the muscle bound bulstrode of course having them under some kind of glamor that normal people couldn't dispell might workimmortal Fangs
(#) DonPJuan 2008-09-05
whoops I meant to say as long as it's not instead of as long as it is, blasted early mornings with not enough coffee in me lol
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