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immortal Fangs
(#) kyzhart 2008-09-07
I like this a lot. You gave reasoning behind changing her into a Damphir and then explained how Harry became one as well. Very well explained and logical. You might want to explain the reference to Raiden however. I didn't get where that came from.immortal Fangs
(#) Alexandraya 2008-09-13
I am surprised, few still recognize the old holy day for what it is, and fewer know it's name. Samhain, it has been long since I have seen it in text...and here we come upon it soon again...not long now till we can again celebrate the new year.
My, I sound like a follower of the Goddess when you read that, though considering...one might say I am...hmm food for though.
Well, and interesting start to be sure. If you do not plan on making this a Super!Harry (I can not believe I just typed that) you will have to find a unique way of evening things out. Ah well, I shall attend to the next chapter now. Please excuse my insane rambling.
Yours
Alexandraya BeluAuthor's response
Its not so much that Harry won't be Super Harry
Its that there is a strong possibility the he will be fighting the likes of Marcus (Underworld), The Voudun Vampire, and FREAKS (Hellsing), The Master and Dru (Buffy), The Krakan(Highlander). Well I am not sure if he will be facing these exact named baddies, but Hogwarts and his adventures there will be relaxing for him, unless he is facing off Rasputin (Rasputin is a definate baddie, we already know him. Just not under that name. No he isn't Tom), With the Exception of a few Wizards and Witches many of them his friends and family Harry will be over powered for Hogwarts. It will be a nice place for him to find people to Mentor and teach beyond the limits of Wizard magic. This might be a very long ficimmortal Fangs
(#) mephistopeles 2008-10-06
pretty interesting story so far. can't wait to read the next chapter. keep up the good work.immortal Fangs
(#) gms 2009-04-24
sounds refreshing mate
really good plot, cant sa have read this one before
hope u continue and keep updating speedily
immortal Fangs
(#) paulblay 2009-07-07
What was Dumbledore actually arrested for? "Being manipulative" isn't a crime.
The English also is rather odd in places, is it not your first language?
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