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Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) neve 2008-10-13
Loved it.
I absolutely love the way you write the relationship between Gerard and his daughter. It's so cute and you can feel the genuine love between them.
I'd hate to be Donna if he ever finds out the truth.
Please update soon. Sorry it's taken me so long to discover your wonderful story. I haven't had much time to do any reading.Author's response
Awww shucks, thanks so much for all your compliments, they mean the world to me.
I'm pleased you can feel the love, and I would hate to be Donna too, not sure whether Gee will find out, haven't figured that out yet.
Thanks so much for your reviews!
More soon I promise!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) WeasleyTwinGirl 2008-10-13
Ah they didn't take Charli!! For now. Lol I love Charli, she's soo cute!Author's response
Yeaaah, for now ;)
I just couldn't do it to any of them
thanks so much for your review!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) Moonshyne 2008-10-13
Hi there Dondon,
I loved this chapter and felt so bad that he had to endure the social worker inspecting Charli.
But bad Donna, at least be brave enough to admit what you did.
I also loved how he put all the guys names down and was so careful about answering the questions fearful that they might take Charli away.
Great job.Author's response
Thanks a lot :)
Im not sure when Donna will tell Gerard, if she does ;D
the guys are like fathers to her, just wait till they go on tour :D
thanks so much for your review!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-10-13
great job on this part! i also love the way you write the interaction between gerard and his daughter. can't wait for the next part ;)Author's response
thank you so much :)
your reviews make me wanna write more and more!
dondon xo.
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