- Loved it.
I absolutely love the way you write the relationship between Gerard and his daughter. It's so cute and you can feel the genuine love between them.
I'd hate to be Donna if he ever finds out the truth.
Please update soon. Sorry it's taken me so long to discover your wonderful story. I haven't had much time to do any reading.
Author's responseAwww shucks, thanks so much for all your compliments, they mean the world to me.
I'm pleased you can feel the love, and I would hate to be Donna too, not sure whether Gee will find out, haven't figured that out yet.
Thanks so much for your reviews!
More soon I promise!
- Hi there Dondon,
I loved this chapter and felt so bad that he had to endure the social worker inspecting Charli.
But bad Donna, at least be brave enough to admit what you did.
I also loved how he put all the guys names down and was so careful about answering the questions fearful that they might take Charli away.
Author's responseThanks a lot :)
Im not sure when Donna will tell Gerard, if she does ;D
the guys are like fathers to her, just wait till they go on tour :D
thanks so much for your review!
Sign up to review this story.