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The Forgotten One
13 reviewsYour classic ‘Wrong BWL’ story with a twist. Ryan Michael Potter is hailed as the BWL. His older brother Harry is neglected for a year before he is left at a brutal orphanage. Roughly a year af...
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The Forgotten One
(#) Sweetcars12 2009-10-30
Wow! Excellent first chapter. That got my attention. Love it! Can you, please, please please please make it not a One-Shot! Update.The Forgotten One
(#) hpstrmlnr 2013-11-13
Well fuck you. You write a great first chapter and stop for no reason, without telling us why!
You have real talent for writing and we'll never get to know what comes next.
GO. FUCK. YOURSELF.
HpStRMlnRThe Forgotten One
(#) hpstrmlnr 2013-11-13
FUCK YOU! I WISH I KNEW WHO YOU WERE SO I COULD COME AT YOUR PLACE AND KICK YOU IN THE BALLS!
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