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• The Forgotten One

  (#) ZZ9PluralZAlpha 2008-10-30

  Interesting. Very much so. I liked the silver spikes thing; I wonder, did you consider making them butterfly shaped?
  
  Probably not many people will get that.

• The Forgotten One

  (#) The_Blood_Rider 2008-10-30

  I don't usually read these types of fics but I was pretty bored and figured, what the hell. Glad I did.
  
  Can't wait to see what happens next, the outcome of the battle, everyone's reaction to Harry, his reaction to them, especially how he became as he is.
  
  So, here's hoping we'll get the next installment soon.
  
  

• The Forgotten One

  (#) bluedevil26 2008-10-30

  very interesting,cant wait to see whats next

• The Forgotten One

  (#) Seelvor 2008-10-30

  Personally, I rarely, if ever, review the first chapter of a story, preferring to read a bit more and have an idea of how it will go.
  
  However, this is an absolutely cracking first chapter. Entertaining, suitably dark and gothic yet still light-hearted enough to make me chuckle as the werewolves get slaughtered mercilessly (I'm sick like that).
  
  I look forward to more. (Do you have pairings set up yet, if any?)

• The Forgotten One

  (#) Uthrafw 2008-10-30

  What is next?
  
  I am afraid that may not be hard to guess. Haryy's family isgoing to be sooo so sorry for what they did to him. They will help him get in touch with his feelings, so he can forgive them and find love and happiness. I see a lot of angst in future chapters because after Voldemort is gone he has no more purpose. 'Wrong BWL' stories have verylimited possibilities for plot. I would be surprisd if there would besomething new.
  
  Your writing should deserves a better plot. Be creative. Don't write clichè.

• The Forgotten One

  (#) deramo29 2008-10-30

  these type are usually very cliche but I really enjoyed how this one started. Very exciting!

• The Forgotten One

  (#) ChiVayne 2008-10-31

  Keep going. I'll be interested in seeing the aftermath, and what Harry does.

• The Forgotten One

  (#) jabarber69 2008-10-31

  okay you got my attention! Well written but...

• The Forgotten One

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-11-01

  Good start.
  
  gunny

• The Forgotten One

  (#) slashslut 2008-11-04

  WOW! now that's a hell of a first chapter! after that attention-grabbing start, i can't wait to see what comes next!!

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