(#) The_Blood_Rider 2008-10-30I don't usually read these types of fics but I was pretty bored and figured, what the hell. Glad I did.
Can't wait to see what happens next, the outcome of the battle, everyone's reaction to Harry, his reaction to them, especially how he became as he is.
So, here's hoping we'll get the next installment soon.
- Personally, I rarely, if ever, review the first chapter of a story, preferring to read a bit more and have an idea of how it will go.
However, this is an absolutely cracking first chapter. Entertaining, suitably dark and gothic yet still light-hearted enough to make me chuckle as the werewolves get slaughtered mercilessly (I'm sick like that).
I look forward to more. (Do you have pairings set up yet, if any?)
- What is next?
I am afraid that may not be hard to guess. Haryy's family isgoing to be sooo so sorry for what they did to him. They will help him get in touch with his feelings, so he can forgive them and find love and happiness. I see a lot of angst in future chapters because after Voldemort is gone he has no more purpose. 'Wrong BWL' stories have verylimited possibilities for plot. I would be surprisd if there would besomething new.
Your writing should deserves a better plot. Be creative. Don't write clichè.
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