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When it all falls apart, who will be there to pick you up?
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Californiacation
(#) HellOnHigh9 2008-11-11
finally. I loved the update. Very emotional. Update soon.
xo CatCaliforniacation
(#) HellOnHigh9 2008-11-11
finally. I loved the update. Very emotional. Update soon.
xo CatCaliforniacation
(#) HellOnHigh9 2008-11-11
finally. I loved the update. Very emotional. Update soon.
xo CatCaliforniacation
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-11-11
fantastic update!!
oh man! poor Gerard and poor Jack!
i love Frank! and i love this story so much!
cannot wait for the next chapter.Californiacation
(#) kitkatpwl 2008-11-11
hahahhahaaaaaaajahahahahahahahaaaaaaa
Ok, the whole chapter wasn't funny but that last part killed me. I dunno, I was just giggling like crazy and it could be part sleep deprivation, I'm not sure.
It's kind of funny how you've turned what most authors would write as the most tragic turn of events into, I dunno, like, a normal everyday occurance. I mean, Gerard has gone back to drinking - heavily even, and Frank is just sitting beside him, drinking the rest of the beer, joking.
I mean, I think that's the way they would actually deal with it, you know? I really think that your depiction is completely accurate. I can't imagine Frank flying off the handle and screaming at Gerard and what not, because, fuck, he's really not that much better, is he?
Great great chapter. I really loved it and I can't wait for the next - I need some more Frank! haha
Cheers
KatCaliforniacation
(#) lilrainforest 2008-11-11
God Gerard... I feel so bad for Jack. He's six and he has to deal with a mother who's miles away, a dad who's getting too drunk to take him to school, and well, then there's Frank. Frank Iero. He's basically fixing everything, and is trying to pull the family back together. I'm still skeptical about what Gerard and Frank are going to do because Jack loves Frank was too much, like a second father. I really loved the pancakes scene though, that was damn right cute. But jeez, Jess is such an idiot. She had to ruin a good momemnt where Jack, Frank and Gerard could all be alone together, spending some good quality time.
Oh, and little Jack swearing? Wow dude, I would've gotten my ass beat if I did that when I was that age. Then again, I learned my first swear word when I was like three... my mom scraped the side of the car... self expanitory and off-topic... a lot. Heh sorry.
I really love this story seriously, I had a similar idea to this as well, but it was like Frank had a kid and stuff. Meh, I'm afraid to write it now because yours is going to totally blow it out of the water.
Update when you can please. It's amazing.
xo, RayCaliforniacation
(#) KirstinRevenge 2008-11-12
OMG!
they sooo need to get together!
go mikey! haha
a year, man! I would not live!!
update soon, dude.
this is amazing!
xoCaliforniacation
(#) PossiblyInsane 2008-11-15
This is really good.
I just started reading this and I actually finished it all in one settting. Even though the plot isn't original, the interpretation and dare I say, Freardyness of the story makes makes it quite stellar.
I hope you keep writing; you seem expontentially talented. Please, update soon.
--PossiblyInsane
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