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Deadlines
(#) easykeys 2008-11-23
*sniffs*
That was so sad, in a good way if you get me.
I dunno why but I wanted her to cry in front of him lol, I'm pleased they are going to see eachother soon though, hopefully.
Love this so much and I felt so bad for them both. Although I could imagine Frank being sent over to sort that girl out, who by the way, sounds like a right evil bitch!
Cant wait for more :)
dondon xo.Author's response
Thank you Dondon, i can't believe you reviewed so fast. It was ace. I was really debating whether she would cry or not. I wanted to make her strong and she would want to protect him for feeling bad.
The evil bitch returns,
so pleased you liked itDeadlines
(#) moonpig 2008-11-23
I'm so pleased you updated and wow it was great.
Loved the sending over Frank bit. ha ha. I agree with Dondon - Kate is a bitch.
As always, you write their conversations so well and you always have me laughing.
Loved the goodbye - so sadAuthor's response
I really wasn't planning for Kate to appear in this chapter but i realised something had to happen and then this idea came in my head. She is evil, one of those people that gets everything she wants.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review.Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-11-23
great update!!
thanks for that!
really good update.
want to say so much but instead.....Kings of leon AND Biffy Clyro!
i am so jealous!!!!!!!!
no money really to see gigs at the mo!! and i'd need a babysitter!!
have fun and cannot wait for the next update!
oh and it was you saying "wee" that gave yourself away, at first i totally thought scottish but then also N.Irish and i wouln't want to offend!!
anyway thanks and have a blast at the gig!!
Author's response
lol, i know "wee", i didn't even realise it had snuck in there.
Thanks for taking the time to review, i really appreciate it.
I know i am so lucky going to see Kings of Leon (2 weeks today) and Biffy (just before christmas). :)Deadlines
(#) Moonshyne 2008-11-23
Hi there neve,
I was so excited to see the update!!
That was amazingly beautiful, I loved reading every second of it.
I agree with everyone else, Kate is such a bitch.
I loved how she kept it togehter until he was gone and finally allowed herself to lose it.
I really can't wait to see what happens next this is by far my favorite story. And I really love a lot of stories here.
Have fun at the gigs.
I almost got the chance to see MSI and Leathermouth but finances fell short. Oh well, I'm glad someone will be having fun!!Author's response
Do you really mean that? Thank you so much.
I hope to update soon but i've not even started writing it yet. Lots of ideas brewing.
You had the possibility of tickets for leathermouth!!!! I hate when you have no money and a chance like that comes along. I've been watching them on Youtube. They look so good live.Deadlines
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-24
I'm glad you wrote a story where Bob gets some =D You write really well (even without spell check).Author's response
I love Bob, he's so funny. I have just had a look at their new website and Bob cracks me up.
Thanks for reviewing.
I don't know why my spell check just stopped working. Story of my life at the mo.Deadlines
(#) disturbedangel6 2008-11-27
ZOMG!! This is so good!
No offence but normally stories like these kinda get boring but your isn't
YAY! Update soonxxAuthor's response
No offence taken, i know where you coming from though. It seems to take me an age to get anywhere with this. So pleased you are still enjoying this and thank you so much for reviewing :)
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