- Well, that's a bit different "Return" story; it looks like Harry's getting somethings eet right almost immediately; likely to Dumbles' immense irritation and annoyance. I do think Madame Malkin needs to either better train her girls or get more intelligent ones as Wendy clearly isn't suited for the job (I suspect she's going to either get a demotion or a pink slip soon after that contretemps).
(#) thegreyone 2009-11-01Great introduction to so many possibilities. As fiction does not require JKR's canon, would like to see Potter's Surprise extended with major changes. Some suggestions - very clear Bashing of Weazleys and their god Dumbledore. Look at "Harry's House" and "Order of the Murderer’s" by Broomstick_Flyer and "More Important Things" by Robst on ff. The fics named have a common theme of total removal from DDs careless and deadly influence and the magic worlds lack of common logic and commonsense. Also these fics have no great problem in dealing with Voldemort.
Even in JKRs story, DD comes over as nasty as LV - the abuse before school of Harry, the abuse of most students in the school - the lack of care and teaching of those children he is responsible for. And dont forget the Weazleys - JKR mentions it but other fic writers pick it up, ie the potions abuse.
Let Harry be counseled for his abuse, let the bonded pair learn non magical defense and offense, learn the laws of both worlds, and also receive knowledge of magic from the goblins and elves.
Please consider continue writing us a truly great fiction with such a wonderful beginning.
- "Very well I suspect this won't turn out right tonight not matter what we do."
"As long as these two do not spent anymore time apart than necessary they should be fine from here on,"
the most time they can spent apart is on the
All I am aware of is when I met your daughter she like me.
despite the fact there where other boys around she talked to me like I was somebody it was worth knowing.
Realized she'd struck far hard than intended Emma added,
"You identity is confirmed Mr. Potter. May I keep the rest of this vial for your heirs?"
Senior goblin Ragnok you presence honors us,"
I was also hoping their might be a set of rings in the family vault
After consuming them Harry quick was dispatched upstairs to get the books and paper while Hermione and Andromeda held a quick discussion
that one can be in and attend class without being scene by others.
I might be looking a push to take over guardianship of him.
... this looks like it would have been one of the best HP time travel stories out there if it had been continued again i would have shared the typos in a pm had i been able to
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