Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > heaven help us
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heaven help us
(#) Skullkid 2008-11-28
I love Mikey's character, that's exactly how I always think of him - always worrying about his big brother, and not wanting him to get hurt, or to hurt someone else. And Gerard's cluelessness is absolutely adorable!
However, I do think you should proofread before you post. I can spot a few minor spelling mistakes, and there are a lot of places that should have commas, but don't. The storyline is also a tad clichéd - but then, we all like a good old boy-meets-boy scenario!
I love the line, The week had gone by in a blur of golden eyes and a certain person that smelled off faint coffee and sugar. It paints a great picture of Frank - and of course, we all know that Gerard would be especially attracted to someone who smells of coffee! ;)
I loved this last chapter, too - very hot, the perfect mix of romance and sex.
I can't wait to read more :Dheaven help us
(#) CaroBECKETT 2008-11-28
This was much too cute.
Have I told you this is one of my fave stories?
Its soooooo cute .
Ah. I love it.
Congrats.heaven help us
(#) corruptionchild 2008-11-29
I'm sitting next to you as you write this...
Its killing me, your cliffhangers are great, but you gotta post more soon.
I really like where this is going xxxheaven help us
(#) xx__ilovemikey__xx 2008-11-29
Thankies for the reviews everyone aww im so glad that its one of your fav stories... sorry bout all the wee spelling mistakes cause when I type them up... I type them up on my sidekick so I end up with a lot of mistakes but im gonna edit it all when I next get on the computer.
Im gonna also put in a twist that I hope you all like in a couple of chapters :) so keep reading
Xoxo Stazziaheaven help us
(#) bloodyvalentine 2008-12-29
oh wow didnt expect that!
ur amazing!
love ur story so far!!!!!heaven help us
(#) warwornlipstick 2009-06-02
Whooa, they're moving quite fast. And although I agree with the first person who reviewed, I liked it.
:)
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