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Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
35 reviewsSomething in Harry changes that summer between fourth and fifth year. At his trial he discovers what someone has been hiding from him since he was born.
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Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) jabarber69 2008-11-09
Hey I like your story! its well written, and kinda intriquing as in who is the voice in his head? hope to see more and soon!Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Wolfric 2008-11-09
I enjoyed the chapter, it seems like a good beginning. I am curious to see where it leads. Thanks for writing. W.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) kruen 2008-11-09
Very interesting start. Shows potential in being a good story.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Vanir 2008-11-09
I'm impressed. While the whole setup might be considered cliché, most things can these days. However, this was carried out with great style and flair. I'm really looking forward to the continuation of this promising storyline, and while I wonder where Harry got this skill and drive to handle people and elves, I'm sure you'll get around to explaining it one of these days.
Eagerly awaiting.
VanirHarry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) IrishChaos 2008-11-09
Good story. I am tired of reading about childish muggle Harry. A noble Harry is a right good read. But what is the Inner Voice? An echo of Voldermort maybe?
Anyway i am waiting anxiously for the next chapter.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) thekev 2008-11-09
great start looking forward to what happens nextHarry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Myrmidion 2008-11-09
Great start Harry the hiden aristocrat, I hope it's not some Personality Disorder, and yes there is a little problem the reading, but that can be helped, over all CongratulationHarry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) petteyg359 2008-11-09
The plot seems good, but the dialog SUCKS. The characters are completely different words and sentence structure than they do at the point in canon where your story starts. AU is fine, but it has to become AU from somewhere, suddenly switching things around with no background doesn't work well at all. Work on the dialog and you'll have a great story.
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