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Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
35 reviewsSomething in Harry changes that summer between fourth and fifth year. At his trial he discovers what someone has been hiding from him since he was born.
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Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) rainbow2007 2008-11-09
I love it. I can't wait until the next chapter to see what happen.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) GryffindorDragon 2008-11-10
Good start. I like the voice -- apparently something to do with Harry's Potter heritage.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Cateagle 2008-11-10
Well, that's an attention-getting introduction to your story. I do like the presence of that "little voice" in Harry's mind, though I do wonder about it. I'd suspect it was Tommy-boy, save that it mentioned something muggle like yogurt in a good light and I can't see him doing that; which leaves lots of interesting possibilities that have great potential to confound Albus' plans, even more so that what Sirius' actions already have.
I quite like it so far, bar the readability issues already mentioned.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Clell65619 2008-11-10
- Hmm.. Interesting start.
- Who or what might that 'little voice' be? At first blush I was thinking Tommy-boy, but where would he have learned proper methods for motivating House Elves? and despite his Muggle upbringing, it's not likely that the Tom Riddle raised in an orphanage in 1930-40s Britain had much exposure to yogurt.
- The Voice has an awareness of things both pure-blood and Muggle... An amalgam of James and Lily perhaps?Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) captuniv 2008-11-10
Awesome so far! Like the small changes in Harry, is it the Horcrux prodding his mind? Hope he finds some intesting info in the Library that helps at the Ministry. Keep it coming!Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) godwynn 2008-11-11
Good start, hope to see more of this soon.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) ficbob 2008-11-12
The pure blood voice in Harry's head is proving to be fun and interesting
I hope it can smack down Draco and his goons
Looking forward to moreHarry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) loatroll 2008-11-26
Looking really good so far.
The only thing I have a bit of trouble understanding is that last sentence, you say it's a blood ward (so no Hermione), but Remus can join them? As far as I remember there's at least no official relationship in-between Remus and Tonks in the current time in the timeline? I guess Sirius could just have added him to the wards.
Anyway great start, really looking forward to more.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) slashslut 2008-11-26
ohhh, so many great plot points! my only gripe is that it was too short:( here's hoping for a longer chapter later!
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