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• It Kills Me Seeing Your Face [Sequel to Brought Together, Torn Apart]

  (#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-27

  Whoa! This is like a crazy soap opera dondon! ha!
  
  At some point, you definitely have to delve more into why Gerard just couldn't do the 2nd kid and all that.
  
  I'd say, make it another girl! But, making it a boy would be just as good too ... because then that would be really fulfilling to Frank (since he had a real son he couldn't raise in the 1st story) and probably angsty for Gerard ...
  
  And no wonder you write kids so well (knowing where you work and all!)...
  
  xD

  Author's response

  Haha, yeah it is I guess, definetley gunna get more and more crazy!
  
  Once I come up with a reason for him I will :P
  
  Actually yeah, thats a good point about Frank and it being more fulfilling, props to you boi!
  
  Ha angsty to Gerard, you meanie.
  
  Well you kinda pick up on these things when your surrounded by tots most of the day lol.
  
  thanks for the review :)
  
  dondon xo.

• It Kills Me Seeing Your Face [Sequel to Brought Together, Torn Apart]

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-11-27

  Hi there dondon,
  
  Awww Charli is still really cute and it looks like she still adores the guys.
  
  Gerard was being such a jerk, I still don't understand why he didn't want another kid. Though it does seem like he still has feeling for Harper.
  
  I vote for a boy too. Give Gee the perfect family.
  
  ps is that you on twitter, you never answered me if it is?
  

  Author's response

  Thanks, yeah she still loves them to bits, see she was pretty young when all of the shit went down so she wouldn't remember or understand it.
  
  Yeah he was, I don't understand either I haven't written that far ahead :P
  
  He may have some feelings still, Im not sure whether to take that further or not just yet.
  
  Okay, boy it is :)
  
  Yeah it's me, I sent a reply, whether it got to you or not is a different matter lol.
  
  thanks for the review
  
  dondon xo.

• It Kills Me Seeing Your Face [Sequel to Brought Together, Torn Apart]

  (#) HellOnHigh9 2008-11-27

  It has to be a boy it would be like pay back to gerard not being able to be a father to his son. Update soon Im lovin it

  Author's response

  :O your so evil!
  
  I love it!
  
  boy it is
  
  thanks for the review
  
  dondon xo.

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