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(#) HellOnHigh9 2008-12-08this one sounds like how thode "choose your own adventure" books are written. Quite well written, I'm not afraid of needles or anything but I can understand the anxiety i didnt want to get a needle when i needed to get fillings I thought it would hurt like hell and it didnt my mouth was numb for like ages afterwards tho. Anyways loved it, you really captured the fear well, this definitely should be #22 in "moments".
Author's responseThanks, Cat! I think I'm going to make this one a "stand alone" one though =D
- OMG I dont mine needles but I HATE the dentist with a passion!
My friend was so scared that when the dentist tried to put a brace mould on her she lashed out and punched him, she got banned. Lucky thing ¬_¬
Haha, anyways I don't think this should be a "moments" one, it's still awesome but I think it doesn't feel like one if you get me?
Fab job cant wait for more :D
Author's responseI've totally freaked out at the dentist before, but luckily never punched anyone!
I'm not feeling this one as one of the actual moments as it was more of an experiment for me =D
Glad you liked it though!
(#) Leah270193 2009-01-19Shit, that was powerful. Ya know what? I actually started to feel scared and even got a slight twinge in my jaw as I pictured that needle. I hate doctors and dentist. Especially 'cos of how I am. They look at me like I'm a fucking psychopath.Lol. No really that was awesome gave me the shakes.
I'll rate it to make you smile, after my depressing story that you kindly reviewed for me :)
Oh, p.s I've never read a story in the style you did. It was really interesting and you made it very realistic, you did an superb job. Maybe try a few more like that!
Author's responseI have a big fear of the dentist (and regular doctors too for that matter)!
The POV on this was 2nd person. It's not something that's used very often but it is a good way to really put the reader in the place of the character in the story because of the use of "you" all the time. I might do a few more like that!
Thanks for the review and rate.
Yeah your story is really depressing! LOL
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