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• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-12-21

  Wonderful ending there, and got to say that Pansy and Draco would have well did the same things if they could have. Was wicked to see a Harry and Hermione who were not taking prisnors at all in the end, and that they and Luna had a loving comforting relationship.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) keichan2 2008-12-22

  This was a good story!
  Thank you for sharing!
  

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) Wolfric 2008-12-22

  I seemed to have lost track of the last couple of chapters. Ficwad's alerts seem to be a tad unreliable for me. I know some of my reviews have not been delivered as well. Hopefully this will make it. I really enjoyed this story as I have most of your fine work. I also wouldn't have minded a bit more detail in the conclusion but I still like it. Thanks for writing. W.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) banner 2009-01-09

  I just reread this story from the beginning, and I realy appreciate the ending. It feels good. Satisfying.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) vasilis01 2009-01-11

  Excellent ending. Great to see Pansy and Draco get the what they deserve. Keep writing.

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) nomad062 2009-04-15

  Excellant story! I had the opportunity to read it all in one go so I'm feeling very fortunate.
  
  Nomad

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) noreenklose 2009-04-16

  I really liked this story. IMHO, Hermione should have stabbed Pansy to death with a knife. Fair is fair!
  I'm off to read another story.
  Thanks for writing!
  KUTGW,
  
  Noreen

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) drifter 2009-04-23

  Like everyone else, I "really" enjoyed WVDM, and, again, like everyone else, I would have enjoyed it if you had expanded the later family interaction and adventures...Umm.... think we could talk you into doing a side story?
  
  At almost 60, finding a story that can make me cry is pleasant surprise. That was an exceptional ending and made your even more enjoyable. It definitely going into my favorites.
  
  Thank your for a tremendous read. Soon as I am posting this, I am going to check-out the other stories "you" have posted.
  
  I hope you don't mind that I am going to make a copy of this and send it a daughter who does not have a net connection (economics). When she likes a story (a given with this one) she posts the name and URL at the library she works at. Hope that gets you more reviews.
  
  
  May the MUSE always be with you!!!
  ~!^
  

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) Branwyn 2009-05-10

  Clever, very clever. The Brotherhood, particularly Osiris and Mo, are very much the 'do what's right, not what's easiest' type, and IMHO the Wizarding World needs a bit more of that sort of thing. I'm happy to see that Draco got his metaphorical - and literal- arse handed to him, the little gobshite. I like that you didn't go the easy route and try to redeem his ferrety self, though there have been some LightSide!Draco fics. As for Pansy? I think you might've made her a little eviler (is that a real word?) than JKR did, but yanno, that's OK because she really was an irredeemably annoying character, even in canon. That Pansy's death benefited someone is more than she would have ever done on her own, unless perhaps for her son. All around, a beautifully thought-out and executed (hee) story! Kudos!

• When Vernon Didn't Miss

  (#) skippy64 2009-05-16

  Great story
  
  Thought-provoking concepts
  
  Thanks for sharing

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