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• Unspeakable

  (#) canustakemyheart 2008-12-24

  I'm really diggin' this story. You've really built up the suspense here in a believable way. And I think you're doing a good job with the characterization and dialog. I loved the nurse talking to Mikey ... and the news person at the end was spot on.
  
  =D

• Unspeakable

  (#) canustakemyheart 2008-12-24

  Ok, you might get two posts on this because ficwad is sucking right now.
  
  Anyway, here's what I think I said the first time ...
  
  I'm digging this story. You're doing great with the suspense, characterization and dialog. I loved the nurse talking with Mikey and the news cast at the end was spot on.
  
  =D

• Unspeakable

  (#) iwillstakeyourheart 2008-12-24

  canustakemyheart told me I should read this one. I like it. It's nice to see a story with drama, and action and emotion that has nothing to do with "teenagers in love in high school" (yeah - not really into reading that type of stuff!). And of course, I gravitate towards, "the dark side" as well so I love a story where it's very possible that everything does not turn out "ok".
  
  I like your dialog too.
  
  Keep it up!
  
  =)

• Unspeakable

  (#) disturbedangel6 2008-12-24

  Yay this is so good!
  I love it
  And poor gerard
  Update soonxx

• Unspeakable

  (#) rocker4lifeSAM 2008-12-25

  sorry i didnt review earlier.
  this story is heading off to a great start i really like it!
  cant wait for you to update it =]

• Unspeakable

  (#) Sassy 2009-02-01

  Everything feels so real. As I read I'm feeling everything myself - I feel quite drained at the moment.
  Just so good!
  
  Sas x

• Unspeakable

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-04

  I am so hooked on this now... so you better hope it takes me a while to read...or that I don't get hungry and decide to eat you o_O L O L Just kidding XD
  
  REVENGE

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