(#) canustakemyheart 2009-01-10*munches cookie*
Yeah ... it was good. I liked it. I think the detail level was great 'cause I certainly got a picture of what was going on. I like horror tales that don't all end happy. That's what I liked about the Saw movies, so I think you captured that vibe if this is indeed the last chapter.
(#) lilrainforest 2009-01-10:D So you DID bake cookies!
Sorry, that's all I can think of.
God, this IS so much like Saw...
I almost bought like 1-4 today at the grocery store for like $20. Just cause xD
But... ew... like what the fuck?!
Love you, even though you're as mental as me.
(#) Truest-Blackout 2009-01-10You killed him. I was fucking crying. Like seriously. I feel so sad. Anyways, great story. I fucking love you, you're psychotic just like me. Though technically I'm not psychotic, I just have a sick mind and an out-of-control imagination.
(#) Truest-Blackout 2009-01-10This made me fucking cry. Did you fucking kill him?! Gr. I feel so sad, but this is such a great story.
I fucking love you for writing this. You're just as psychotic as me. Though, technically I'm not psychotic, I just have a dirty mind and an out-of-control imagination.
- I WILL TAKE THAT COOKIE
*places a shot in front of you*
And if you are in a killing psycotic mood please take that shot cuz it will leave you feeling amazing
Take the shot, take the shot, take. the. shot..
Anywho...loved the story your an amazing writer keep writing and Gerard died OMFG I knew he would give his life to save his friends and brother but *cry*. I wanna know the pure unadulterated demented version I Belive it will be super gory that will make me be like what the fuck?
- having two little sisters and a two brothers myself, the sacrifice gerard did seemed kind of obvious, predictable. but that's not a negative thing in this case since it was the only way. none of want to see (or read about) gerard killing his own brother to save himself and his friends. i'd done that too, i'd done anything for my sisters and brothers.
- having two little sister and two brothers myself, the sacrifice gerard did seemed kind of obvious, predictable. but that's not an entirely negative thing in this case, seeing as though it was the only way, none of us wanna see (or read about) gerard killing his very own brother. It was a twisted turn though, to declare the last doll broken. "has to be discarded". that was truly genious, and two simple words "kill him". very rousing.
I realyl liked the way each one was it's own kind of doll, and the games gerard had to play, and win, were especially designed for the certain kind of doll. rug doll, voodoo doll, porcelain doll and a marionette. a broken, useless marionette at that.
that was really my favorite thing about the whole story, that the title 'doll house' didn't only refer to the fact that they were trapped in a huge house, controlled by an unkown party and had to get out, but the fact that they were nothing but dolls in this game, some (like frankie) even in the literal sense of the word. gerard, on the other hand, could mostly be called a doll because of the fact that someone controlled him, watched him and made him 'play' according to her will. the whole concept was extremely interesting and caught my attention at once.
thanks :) oh and sorry for the rant and all the useless analysis.
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