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The Beastly Beauty
(#) Concealed-Convict 2009-02-03
Good work so far. Keep it up. The rapore (I don't think that's how you spell it; it might not even be n American word, but it means interchange or interplay) you have going between Harry and Hestia is definitely intriguing, as is the way you portray Harry. I can't wait to read the next chapter; I'm wondering what the delayed reaction form Ginny will be and what she will think Harry was up to. I also look forward to reading about Lavender's reaction.
Keep up the good work
Concealed-ConvictThe Beastly Beauty
(#) Aelfwine 2009-02-09
Nicely done.
The teasing with Hestia was charming, and I thought Farfalla was quite compelling. I'm wondering if she'll have more of a role in future chapters.
Glad to see that Lavender's home safe with Harry and Ginny now. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
What sort of "creature" exactly is she? I was surprised that she wasn't caged with the werewolves--I'd assumed after the first chapter that she'd been infected by Fenrir Greyback during the Battle for Hogwarts.
Not that I mind being deceived, of course--that's part of writing, sometimes. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.The Beastly Beauty
(#) Nautilus 2010-08-26
interesting concept... nice execution as well... loved the play between harry and hestia (what is only play? at least on hestia's behalf?)
loved your development of characters, harry was probably a bit too easy in giving away his gold, but nevertheless, i can see harry's seeing the good in people... especially damsels in distress...
can't wait to hear Lavenders story, and what impact it has on Harry. Will he feel responsible for letting his friend disappear and not following up with them... will he feel like he let them down in some way... probably... looking forward to see a more angry and aggressive Harry against the goblins and clients of such organisation. but at the same time looking forward above all to his interaction with Lav.
What role does Ginny play? An under developed character by JK so you could take her any-which direction...
will there be more girls joining the folds of Grim's-old place. this chapter would suggest that harry would at least try to offer them better then they currently have...
Will Farfalla be an insider for Harry. To help the over girls?
lol... lots of questions.The Beastly Beauty
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2011-10-18
I wish there was more!
I'd love to hear Lavenders story.The Beastly Beauty
(#) Cateagle 2013-08-15
I keep hoping for more of this story. It's built nicely so far and I'm looking to hear Lavendar's story and see just what Harryd decides to do about; he's old enough to be out of his "Don Quixote" phase but not so far that he wouldn't be willing to take on a lot to set things straight.
Too, the end of this chapter left me with a feeling that I should be hearing a scene break them from the "Dragnet" tv show, either the first one or the remake (and the first one, from the fifties, was considerably grittier).
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