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Angels and Demons
14 reviewsThe Coven is summoned to the Royal Presence. Abaddon and Voldemort combine to take on Harry
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If Wishes Were Hippogriffs
(#) DemonRaiy 2009-02-03
I really don't want to add to the previous reviews negativity but if it's there, there must be a reason, no?
The end of this chapter bothers me for some reason. Maybe it's the extreme feminist overtones then again, maybe not.
Yes, the wizarding world is male chauvinistic, but should have ALL the wizards in the world have lost their magic just because of a Dark Lord and his summoned god of Chaos? Voldemort was not the only Dark Lord in existence and now that all the women have the power, there will definitely be Dark Ladies in the immediate (read: at the exact moment magic was taken) future. The Coven can only do so much with 21 witches and a goddess of Sex. Absolute power, etc.
I hope this has given you some insight into where all the negative reviews are coming from. I look forward to the final chapter in this tale.If Wishes Were Hippogriffs
(#) DemonRaiy 2009-02-03
I really don't want to add to the previous reviews negativity but if it's there, there must be a reason, no?
The end of this chapter bothers me for some reason. Maybe it's the extreme feminist overtones then again, maybe not.
Yes, the wizarding world is male chauvinistic, but should have ALL the wizards in the world have lost their magic just because of a Dark Lord and his summoned god of Chaos? Voldemort was not the only Dark Lord in existence and now that all the women have the power, there will definitely be Dark Ladies in the immediate (read: at the exact moment magic was taken) future. The Coven can only do so much with 21 witches and a goddess of Sex. Absolute power, etc.
I hope this has given you some insight into where all the negative reviews are coming from. I look forward to the final chapter in this tale.If Wishes Were Hippogriffs
(#) DemonRaiy 2009-02-03
Oops. Sorry for the multiple reviews.Author's response
S'okay, FicWad has been a little slow to respond lately.
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(#) syaygel 2009-02-06
If someone had told me last week that there would be a story where Bellatrix Lestange died and it would be sad and touching I would have told them, "No way."
Way.
That was a very tender moment.
Thank you.
Having said that, WHAT WERE YOU THINKING, taking all the magic away from men.
I'll reserve comment untill I see the last chapter, but you have a lot of explaining to do here!
SabishAuthor's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, and for your kind words regarding Bellatrix's "swan song."
I appreciate your willingness to read the /whole/, completed story before rushing to judgement, some of your fellow readers could learn from your example!
Next and last update will be this coming weekend.
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