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• Searching for the Power

  (#) Ryudo3 2009-02-01

  Very good. Really love how the story is going. Sorry still not really good at giving reviews.

  Author's response

  hehe, all reviews are good reviews. Even bad reviews...
  
  I'm starting to feel like harry so I will quit before I over analyze that statement.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) DrT 2009-02-01

  I hope the girls are 'protected' -- the way Harry is spurting all over, they might be having virgin births in 9 months!

  Author's response

  Hmmmm, I would assume that Molly had that conversation with them soon after she told Harry to be careful. I just forgot to write it. I suppose I can easily write in a flashback or explanation.
  
  Honestly though, Harry is so hormonally charged and mentally challenged a the moment, he could care less at this point.
  
  I will work it in somewhere, good catch. Sometimes things make perfect sense in your head so you forget to explain in writing. I am sure you know exactly what I man being one of my fav authors and all.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) DragonWing 2009-02-01

  I was reading your Author's Note at the end...and I don't think I've ever really played Truth or Dare. Your reasoning behind their actions are sound, but doesn't that mean Hermione is also repressing guilt?

  Author's response

  Definitely.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) zicou 2009-02-01

  great, continuuuue!
  Z.

  Author's response

  I shall, thank you for taking the time to review.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) Cateagle 2009-02-01

  O-kay, it should be interesting to see them all talking and working out guilt and other emotions together; I rather suspect that Ron's neglect of this process is going to turn around and bite him big time. If/when it does, he'll really have only himself to balme since he was offered the same opportunities and declined them. One can hope, mostly against hope, that he's mature enough to see this. The actions seem realistic enough from what I remember of being that age (though time may have dimmed those memories, 'twas longer ago than I care to admit) and I'll echo the hope that the girls have used appropriate protective measures 'cause I doubt Harry's in quit the mental shape, at the moment, to consider those; though I'll reckon he's going to sweat about it when he thinks back in retrospect.
  

  Author's response

  Guilt can do funny things to a person. A cheating spouse may suddenly become much more attentive.
  
  A guy cheating with his best friends girl will drop hints and try to get caught. But when it comes time to stop himself he will rationalize his way into having sex with her again.
  
  A guy who feels guilty about neglecting his duty. Will let anything slide so he feels better about himself in comparison.
  
  I am trying to keep it realistic without just having them shag and then feel bad about it, which is what would happen in real life in this situation. It is a little bit far fetched but that is so it makes good reading.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) DJ32 2009-02-01

  That was Great. I can see that happing at that age that is the first time I have scean what would really happen to a 15 yr old boy with 2 naked girls in his bed. Keep it up.

  Author's response

  Well, if Harry is going to date half of hogwarts, and shag most of that number. He has to learn self control one way or another.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) bgoldnyxnet 2009-02-05

  Don't worry about the "squick" factor. This is another example of how people trying to deal with their sexual feelings can be hotter than detailed descriptions of sex. That feeling of "they're almost there, but not quite"...

  Author's response

  Yeah, I think the unresolved tension is hotter than the actual stuf sometimes.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) LabRat 2009-02-15

  Given what I know of youth today, and all the UST and sexual frustration, I'm surprised Ginny hasn't mounted Harry, or vice versa, yet. As far as Hermione, the whole 'guy shunts his girl, and another bloke gets the benefits' thing happens far too often for them not to have gone this far. Again, I'm surprised that they haven't gone a little further considering the atmosphere and circumstnaces.
  
  By the way, did anything go into Ginny during that bed 'threeway'. Even if he didn't actually penetrate her, she could still get pregnant if some of his baby batter got into her. With the way you described things, and the mess she was after she rolled off of him, it's very possible.

  Author's response

  While it is quite possible, people have uprotected sex all the time without getting pregnant, so they have been lucky.
  
  I agree, it is a testimony to Harry's self control that he hasn't given in and attacked one of them, or let things happen yet.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) red_jacobson 2009-03-25

  Nicely done! I'm really enjoying the story so far, and this chapter was extremely hot! I'm really not digging on the idea that Ron and Hermione are together in any form, but that's a personal opinion, and I'm happy to go along with the story and see what happens next.
  
  red

  Author's response

  Ron and Hermione had to happen even if they don't stay together. JKR Had them dancing around each other since first year.
  
  By no means does that mean they have to stay together.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) Hoopz 2009-07-21

  "So I was walking through your apartment naked, and saw your girlfriend laying on the bed also naked, and I swear I just tripped..."
  Haha that made me chuckle for about 5 minutes.

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