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Blinded in chains
(#) doyleangel 2009-02-06
great update....i'm glad that frank is talking to gerard a little bit more. I hope he talks to Gerard about what is going on and the Gee can stop it. update soon!Blinded in chains
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-02-06
Hi ... I'm not sure if I've reviewed before but I've been reading. I was hesitant at first because this story was going to be a "ferard" ... but I actually like the story you've cooked up. It's like a mystery drama.
Anyway, I thought I'd offer the very slightest constructive criticism. Actually it's not a criticism at all really, it's just that if you want to make it sound more "American", just replace a few words ...
Instead of petrol, we say gas.
coloured = colored.
And instead of fringe, we can bangs.
lol
I think that was it =)Blinded in chains
(#) CaroBECKETT 2009-02-06
im sorry i havent updated in ahwile but ive been grounded
im so sorry for franky "(
but im glad gee and him are talking.
i love this story. :)Blinded in chains
(#) HellOnHigh9 2009-02-06
Nice update, sad about whats happening. Cant wait to read more soon.
XO CaTBlinded in chains
(#) Hands-Stained-Red 2009-02-06
awwww!!!!!! i love it i love it i love it!!! more more more!!! i love it! poor frankie! but its a great story! more pleaseBlinded in chains
(#) smashingpoprocks 2009-02-08
i found your story yesterday and i was as well hesetent about the whole ferard thing. but its not what i expected at all and really good so far. i made an account just to say i really hope you update soon. i'm dying to know what happens in the next instalment.Blinded in chains
(#) warwornlipstick 2009-04-02
Aww, this was really good. I'm starting to love this story, I must admit. :D
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