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Last Train Home
5 reviewsThe service brought back so many memories. Seeing the coffin had hit her hard, knowing he was in there. Nothing prepares you for that
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Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-02-17
oh shit you made me cry! i can relate to this part of the story very much.
very well written and so great to read you again!
so last chapter coming up, it has ben a pleasure to read your first MCR fanfiction, you have always been such a gracious author. i really have loved coming along for the ride. can't wait for the last chapter, and yeh a sequal in the future??!
and i look forward to you updating your other story.
cheers m'dears!Author's response
hug aww thank you so much. I'm sorry i made you cry, it feels kinda good but sad that it will soon be finished. It might take me a wee bit to post because i'm determined to try and wrap it up well.
Thank you once again, it was so nice to read your review.Deadlines
(#) HellOnHigh9 2009-02-17
loved the update I feel so bad for jilly.
UPDATE SOON!
XO CATAuthor's response
Cheers Cat, thanks so much for reviewing. How nice is Bob? I'm so happy people have really enjoyed this story.Deadlines
(#) cnharp 2009-02-17
i absolutely LOVE!!!! this story. it is amazing. i seriously cried reading this chapter. it is a very well thought out story and is very well written. you really are doing and amazing job. i can't wait for the last chapter, but i'm sad it's ending. i would love a sequal!!!
anyways, keep up the amazing work and i look forward to reading your future stories.
xo - cassiAuthor's response
Wow thanks Cassi, it's truly amazing when people leave reviews and the fact you really like my story. I;m so happy. Thank You.Deadlines
(#) easykeys 2009-02-22
Neve.
Im sorry I didn't review sooner. This was one emotional chapter and so excellent I just had to read it twice.
It's officaly NOBODY beats the Bryar! This was a really moving chapter- althogh Im sad its ending soon =(
Can't wait for more =)
D xAuthor's response
Hey D, no need to apologise at all. I was updating my other story and hit this one instead which is why it came up to the top again. I'm so pleased you liked it.
I agree Bob rocks :)Deadlines
(#) Moonshyne 2009-02-24
Hi there Neve,
Sorry I hadn't reviewed earlier.
This chapter was just so sad. I could really feel her anxiety and not just with her father's death but how her aunt made her feel about it all.
I loved how her cousin stuck up for her.
I'm glad Bob was there for her and followed her lead in consoling her.
It was really well written and I'll be sorry when this story is over.Author's response
Thanks for the huge compliment, it's been ages since i last updated so it was lovely to find all your reviews. My final update is almost ready.
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