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Harry Potter and YASMWTS
(#) siaru 2009-03-27
Story is truncated; please reload in full because the suspense is as cruel as the story is good.
Author's response
- its good now, I just checked.Harry Potter and YASMWTS
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2009-03-27
Brilliant as ever. I'm hard-pressed to find one thing that stands out above everything else in this story, but I suppose that's more because you handle every bit of it so well.
Looking forward to more.Harry Potter and YASMWTS
(#) bluehorse 2009-03-27
So...you gonna de-age Padma?
Shame you couldn't have named Neville and Hermione's son Richard, then she would have.....
Tom.....
Harry......
and Dick?Author's response
- You will never know how close I came to having Richard Longbottom in the story.Harry Potter and YASMWTS
(#) dennisud 2009-03-27
Do I see A future trio in the offing?
And Ceiliegh seems very close to Tom!
I'm also loving the fact that Mille's Sytherin's head of house. Her imposing nature should keep them in line especially after that speech!
We'll we see Um-toad also, maybe being an idiot as usual?
dennisudAuthor's response
- No, not really.
- Well, yeah. He took a beating for her, AND his mum is her hero...
- As I saw it, Snape got the gig as soon as he got his Mastery, why not Millie... Especially when there is no doubt in anyone's mind that she's likely to react physically before she thinks magically. How better to keep the old school Slytherins in line?
- No, no Umbridges will be used to terrorize children in this story (well, none beyond Delores' niece)Harry Potter and YASMWTS
(#) daknee_k 2009-03-27
Excellent again! I really look forward to any update of your stories. Love the direction that the Padma line is moving in. Thanks!Harry Potter and YASMWTS
(#) PerfesserN 2009-03-28
Oh yes, Padma and Luna de-ageing will give Hormonal!Harry someone, make that two someones to concentrate on - and the budding relationship between Tom and Caleigh has promise - kind of like the dymanic between young Harry and Hermione, but without an interfereing, insufferable red-headed git.
He charges in to rescue the brainy muggleborn, but this time, instead of a troll, they are tackling three Slytherins with troll-like attitudes toward first-gen magic users.
Write on, write on!
N!Harry Potter and YASMWTS
(#) DrT 2009-03-28
Go Millie! Padma (and maybe Luna) might be disappointed if Harry doesn't fall for them! Or are they searching for a way to selectively change her memories?Harry Potter and YASMWTS
(#) BJH 2009-03-30
Really, really nice chapter. You've given us some great character development in all the characters.
I am wondering when the Merlinettes go to the castle will they retain their own memories? And how long will it take for their research to be completed?
this is obviously not going to be a short tale so it could be years down the road.
You also get kudos for Millie. I thought she had to be someone from canon the way you weren't telling us her name and I was wondering all along if she was a purist or not. You left it delightfully ambiguous until her time in the tower alone. I wonder if she knows that Harry is HARRY and not his son? I am wondering how long before she is deeply embroiled in the developing plot?
Again really well done.
BJHAuthor's response
- It's going to be a long tale, but not a long story. With this chapter, I'm done with first year and next will be either fourth or fifth. Then 7th year, then 25, then finally, their 40th birthdays for a wrap up. so 4 more chapters.
- Millie looks at Harry and sees the Harry she remembers from first year, sans scar, she (like a goodly portion of the population) that Harry Longbottom is the Son of Harry Potter, and that Tom is his fraternal twin... The only ones who know Harry is Harry and Tom is Tom are the core of the DA the bulk of whom are oath bound to never speak of it, Minerva, Poppy, Pomona and Filius.
- as far as the plot goes, there isn't really one, to tell you the truth, the story is Harry and Tom growing up.Harry Potter and YASMWTS
(#) DavidMPotter 2009-04-01
This is one on my favorite fics. I do hope Luna and Padma de-age and become Harry's women.
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