- haha okay okay i'm reviewing :)
i'm glad ur obsessed with writing the story cause it's really good!
i can't wait to see how thing will develop between dani and gerard but i don't think he's gonna allow himself to be pushed away that easily by her.. which is a good thing :)
(#) princessofthedark 2009-03-29i really like ur story, just started reading it today. some real powerful stuff you have written and I can only imagine how hard it would be to write if it does reflect ur own life.
im glad u are enjoying writing this story as I can not wait for another update!!
- "The bruises can always heal... But my heart never can." Seemed rather melodramatic/sentimental coming from Dani. Despite being one of those broken/fierce characters people just love to write, she seems ... Bleh, I'm not sure how to say, but it just doesn't sound right. Whatever.
I can empathize with her situation - the not liking to let people in part, anyways. Not the domestic abuse part. Not sure if someone who isn't like that would understand her... but again, whatever.
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