The train ride, and the opening dinner -- some characters get surprises
Well done. Nice to see the return of the N.A. Confederation and the Druids. Characterizations are solid and consistent with your usual work as well. I'm looking forward to more, especially what you may have in mind for "poor Delores" /snicker/.
Well, 'twas quite a surprise to see a new chapter so soon. It's a fun ride back to Hogwarts and Harry clearly has become far better educated about the wizarding world and its customs. Although she's not the DADA instructor, I see Umbridge is still there; I rather suspect Harry's new knowledge and training is going to make this position even less pleasant for her than canon was.
(#) DrT 2009-04-21
grenouille: No Druids have been used in the writing of this fic (at least through Chapter XI)
Cateagle: In canon, few characters seem to understand the power of details (Hermione and sometimes Snape seem to once in a while, while others, like Percy, adore details but never seem to understand them). Harry has been trained to look at details. . . .
Great chapter mate, can't wait to see what you have planned next, what as Harry got planned for Umbitch?
oooh the story is advancing quite nicely, hey have you ever thought of making this a harry/hermione/luna ship! I know you done so in the past but hermione strict logic and luna outworldly or out of the box look at things balances each other out and they both simple adore and love harry,.
(#) erik 2009-04-21
Another interesting chapter, and it was nice to see the possibilities of faster and deeper ties into the other houses. Well done & thanks.
Pretty good update, though the Malfoy train sequence is starting to lose much of its novelty. There are only so many ways to do that scene, you know? Can't wait to see your plans for Umbridge.
Looking forward to more.
I enjoyed the chapter quite a bit. I like to see Harry on top of things. Thanks for writing. W.
(#) DrT 2009-04-21
jabarber: at least through chapter 11, any r or higher rating comes from violence, not sex. Luna will be a major character, however, which is why I have her and Harry meet
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