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Did I Fail to Mention?
17 reviewsLavender Brown has two guardian angels. It's a long ride on the Yuletide Train. *Warning: contains sweaty snuggle-bunnies!*
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Achieving Clarity
(#) Clell65619 2009-04-22
- Damn Prof, you write good smut. It's too bad that Greenleaf publishing was killed by the internet, you could have cleaned up churning out stuff for them...
- I get a kick out of how you write the third tier characters like Padma and Lavender. Very well done.Author's response
Thanx for the kind words.
Greenleaf, eh? What can I say, story of my life, a day late, a dollar never earned.
As far as my ability to write smut, you know what they say, those who can, do! Those who can’t, write about it while decrying missed opportunities. . .
And hey, tertiary characters deserve love too, right!
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(#) GryffindorDragon 2009-04-22
I want you to know that I appreciate what you're doing for Lavender :) I like the story.Author's response
Yeah, I mean, c'mon. Lavender is one of the only characters who actually likes Ron - I say they deserve each other.
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(#) DrT 2009-04-22
Very nice Lavender, and possibly Pansy as well. And it takes of Won-won!Author's response
Thanx, Doc.
You know Ron, just give hime something good to play with and somehting shiny to eat. . .
Or vice versa!
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(#) whatareyouevensaying 2009-04-22
I feel sorry for canon Lavender as well...I mean, she loves RON! Need I say more?
At any rate, while a little fluffy for my tastes in a couple of areas, I enjoyed this chapter immensely. It's nice to see the beginnings of Neville/Pansy, since that's a far from common pairing.
Looking forward to more.Author's response
Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing.
Did I not post a warning, "Fluffy snugglebunnies ensue"?
If not, I apologize for my lack of proper reader prep.
But, c'mon. You've read my stuff. I'm a fluffy kind of guy.
Just skim over the parts that are excessively endearing and it's not to hard to take. . .
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(#) pi3142 2009-04-22
Neville/Pansy is one of my favourite parings... goodie goodie griffy with bad ass slytherin - do I see latex coming on? hehe.Author's response
Just wait until she gets a load of the herbology master's 'root' stock, oh yeah. . .
"Pansy, I'm so glad you're into bondage, and I'd like to show you my Devil's Snare.
Feed me Seymore!
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(#) Ryudo3 2009-04-22
It's a really good chapter. A very good mix of couples. I'm glad to see a slytherin in the group.
Feed me Seymore! now that just bring up a scary image.Author's response
Thanx, truth be told, I didn't want to leave Neville as the odd man out.
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(#) jabarber69 2009-04-22
Hey remember reading the first chapter when it came out and thinking this has possiblities...but kinda forgot or something else all the other chapters until today when I reread the entire story, which by the way I think is one hell of a story but when hermione and luna were rubbing themselves on harry's leg I figured they would of removed thier knickers, lot less messier that way and even more funner too! also I figure that hermione would of given harry a blowjob instead of what she did do!Author's response
Hmmm, you have a point. But Harry’s first oral experience will be a bit further down the road – what I was after here was a different take on sweaty snugglebunnies, hence the rubbing off in knickers.
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(#) Wonderbee31 2009-04-22
Nice part there, and really enjoyed the time the three spent on the the train together, with your usual hot writing. I agree with you, Lavender got used a bit too much by JKR, and she likely deserved better than she got if she really loved Ron, especially as JKR was busily working on trying to rewrite her characters to fit in the ending she apparently wrote years before. Go Prof! and looking forward to the new trios time alone over the holiday.Author's response
Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing. Something about a long train ride – must be all that rocking. . .
Next chapter will be Yuletide in Ottery St. Catchpole, Hermione will be in France with her folks, and Luna will have Harry all to herself until Christmas Day.
Let your imagination soar!
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(#) DJ32 2009-04-22
Like everyone I like what you did for Lavender & Ron cant't wait to see what Nev gets up to. Keep it up and thanks for writing.Author's response
Thanx,
Expect Neville and Pansy to make an annoucement when they all return to Hogwarts in January.
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(#) Cateagle 2009-04-22
Nice touches with Lavender and Pansy (perhaps something between Pansy and Neville to get her away from the Ferret?). I do like this chapter with both plot development and smut (great blend!!). I can see Neville and Pansy making quite an impression on Hogwarts, especially as they defend each other from the various predjudices; if anything, having to defend like that will bind them to each other far more than anything else.Author's response
Thanx, I like being able to do something nice for Lavender, and Neville will be Lord Protector for the house of Parkinson in the near future that means defending her from harm from any quarter. We’ll learn what happens when you become the scion of a disgraced house, and so will Draco, poor sod.
And there will be bindings, oh yes, Pansy is into that. . .
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