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• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) GinnyMyLove 2009-04-29

  My chapter numbers get all screwy as well, but this one looks like it reset correctly even if the others are still messed up.
  
  I love powerful and independent Harry and yours are always, and especially this one, the best.
  
  It does feel a little rushed to me, BUT I am the one who is at 350k words and barely two weeks into Hogwarts with at least four girlfriends....
  
  So yeah, keep your pace, it is nice to read something new from you when I am all written out.
  
  MLES = Magical Law Enforcement Squad
  
  At least as far as I have made it up in my head. The DMLE would be like the overall department in charge of issues of law and order,
  
  MLES is the Auror division as opposed to HitWizards or Bounty Hunters who most likely have to deal with DMLE on certain matters, the least of which being licensing.
  
  I imagine that the head of MLES is also the Department Head for DMLE which is common in many military commands. We had the "Communications Department N6" which included my shop and my boss who was the Information System Manager was also the N6 Department Head.
  
  Sorry for hijacking your story DrT, you can tell it how it is or you can use my explanation. Whatever :)
  
  

• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) GinnyMyLove 2009-04-29

  http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Department_of_Magical_Law_Enforcement#Magical_Law_Enforcement_Patrol.2FSquad

• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) Aelfwine 2009-04-29

  Nicely done, Doctor!
  
  Sorry I'm so late reviewing this--school and this ruddy cough are kicking me back and forth atween them like a football.
  
  I, also, am looking forward to seeing Umbridge get hers.

• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) sparky40sw 2009-04-29

  I am really enjoying the story, and love this active and un-intimidated Harry. The small scene with Pomfrey was priceless, and a tremendously skillful way to inform Hermione of what is going on. That type of master touch is what puts you in the top 5% of fanfic writers.
  
  thanks for sharing - it really is appreciated

• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) webdoc 2009-04-30

  I am really enjoying this so far. I just discovered this fic this evening and read from start to this point.
  
  One thing I noticed, and it's not your fault, it is a formatting issue. If you look at the drop down for the chapters, it goes 1,2,3,4,4,6. So when you hit the little arrow to go to the next chapter and you are on chapter 4, it doesn't take you very far heheheh.
  
  
  Anyway I really am enjoying this.

• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) DrT 2009-05-01

  webdoc -- all I could do was report it (which I did) and delete and resubmit the last two chapters in the hopes it won't happen again (which I won't)
  
  Glad you like the story; there will be more!

• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) issabissa 2009-05-02

  A very interesting Story!!!! I love what you have so far and am very intrigued to see what else you may have for us. Keep up the great work!
  

• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2009-05-03

  Good chapter.
  
  gunny

• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) d_dappa 2009-06-18

  I spent ages clicking next and then just gave up and clicked on the next chapter in the dropdown list. It was only then I realised that it wasn't going to the next chapter because there is no chapter 5. Dunno if this is an oversight or deliberate.
  
  Anyways, brilliant story, very well written.

• A Fist Full of Galleons

  (#) Wolfric 2009-11-22

  Chapter 5 seems to have disapeared. W.

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