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You're my what?
(#) dennisud 2009-05-03
Hmmmm Good you got Hermione and Many out of Hogwarts and its obvious that I am highly anticipating not only their reunion with Harry but their reactions especially hermione to gabrielle and her status.
In the leat I hope Hermione stays friend in the most as Gabrielle's status is NOT as a fiance' or wife, Hermione can fill that position legally right?
And the decriptions of the clothes fittings was good enough.
Wonder of Sirius will make Harry his Heir soon?
dennisudYou're my what?
(#) DrT 2009-05-03
Oooo, way to stick it to Hogwarts! Usually it's the French who come in last in these comparisonsYou're my what?
(#) jabarber69 2009-05-03
Hey I like your story and all, but the way they keep talking about she's my companion sounds to me like they should be saying she is my mistress or better yet, she is my concubine! that's just the way it sounds like, should it really be she is my wife! or maybe bonds mate might be a better term...You're my what?
(#) rickoshay 2009-05-03
I love to see how you got Harry out from under Dumbles control . Now at least he can have a life and learn his role in life . Keep going it is getting intresting.You're my what?
(#) Cateagle 2009-05-03
Heh, it should be very interesting to see the reactions when Harry and Gabrielle show up at Beauxbatons. If Hermione restrains her response until she knows the full story, she'll be able to keep Harry as a friend, and perhaps more. I rather loved the way Hermione was wisked out from Dumbles' control without him ever realizing it. It should be right interesting when he realizes just how much of his manipulations have been neutralized by these acts.You're my what?
(#) Cateagle 2009-05-03
Oh, BTW, I loved your depiction of Beauxbatons vs. Hogwarts with Hogwarts rather suffering in the comparison. 'Twould appear that Hogwarts curriculum has been "toned down" to fit with what the pureblood offspring are capable of, at a dis-service to all. 'Twould be amusing and interesting if/when this information gets back to Mandy's father and decides to use it to force changes in Hogwarts.You're my what?
(#) wolfe3 2009-05-03
Nice chapter.I's an enjoyable story.
I can't wait to see how heavy-handed dumbledumb will be.
in another story,Sirius was given a trial in France,and,(of course)declared innocent.Are you contemplating that?You're my what?
(#) jjracer24 2009-05-03
Great update, I wasn't sure if you would but am totally glad that you did. Keep them coming, I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the fact that you have Hogwarts being the "not really" best school in Europe. Keep up the good work.You're my what?
(#) Wolfric 2009-05-03
Good chapter. I liked pulling a fast one on Dumbledore. If Harry turns up better prepared than Hermione, that will be another adjustment for her. So did Harry get his ring? Should the introduction have been Mrs. Gabrielle Potter? Anyway, thanks for writing. W.
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