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You're my what?
(#) RavenPuck 2009-05-03
good to see an update hopet osee more soon i also hope u dont make harry wiht any one but gabby i love this cupple and i dont see anufe of themYou're my what?
(#) Nightrunner 2009-05-03
Well, this has been interesting. Hermione seems to be blossoming at Beauxbaton's and Harry has become quite the young man.
Scruffy, you've outdone yourself with this story. I hope to read more very soon.
RobertYou're my what?
(#) Treck 2009-05-03
Nice job. I wonder what the fallout will be when it gets back to Fudge that he was upstaged from France.You're my what?
(#) BlueJedi 2009-05-03
One small critique, If Harry and Family were at a Beauxbatons Dance, and Hermione and Mandy both go now to Beauxbatons, should he not have met them there, He was announced after all. Great story by the way. Please keep the chapters coming it's a great tale.
PeaceYou're my what?
(#) Marius_DeJordan 2009-05-03
Great chapter. A very clever Hermione whats really use her brain. And your Harry remember me a little bit of Jeconais' Harry in Hope, one (IMO) of the best Stories ever. And your Story have the same potential. Thanks for sharing.
Greetings from Germany,
MariusYou're my what?
(#) siledubhghlase 2009-05-03
You've got lots of plot bunnies hopping around here. Harry should be growing out his hair and wearing a signet ring, he's claimed Gabrielle (whatever that means), and Mandy and Hermione have come to Beauxbatons. The sparks are going to fly when Harry and Gabby show up for the next term.
I'm worried now about the Weasleys and the rest of Gryffindor tower still at Hogwarts. With Umbridge in eventual control, it's going to get nasty. So are Ron and Ginny going to start the DA?
I eagerly await the next installment to see how you address your plot bunnies. Good job.You're my what?
(#) DJ32 2009-05-03
Nice work but harry should have taken the guy out to the wood shed. I know this is a H/GD and that is cool but I want to see what happens when Harry & Hermione meet up at school. Thanks for writing and keep it going.You're my what?
(#) ladysavay 2009-05-04
In general I like where this is going and how you portray most of the characters. I'm getting a little tired of Harry constantly complaining about his need to learn about clothes, politics, comportment and conversation. Give it a rest! He has to be smart enough by now with all he's been through to stop trying to channel Ron Weasley and realize the advantages of fighting on a multitude of fronts at the same time.You're my what?
(#) jay21317 2009-05-04
im lovin this story so im curious you have the story marked as a romance and the pairing as harry Gabrielle does that mean they are married cause you introduced her at the ball as delacour potter so wouldnt that mean they would be married just a curiousity hope you can answer it looking forward to next chapter and i do hope that they do end up married or what not since these pairings are so rare and yours is well written and you also pointed out that it was gonna be based off of hope from whats that guys name anyway they ended up together in that story so im hoping they do in these one any way looking forward to next chapter hope its soon
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