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You're my what?
(#) irishdaddy0204 2009-05-04
Very nice. I look forward to Hermione realize she lost Harry to Gabrielle. Not to mention the growth spurt they both put on...You're my what?
(#) swordchucks 2009-05-06
This is a really excellent story. Sure, your ideas aren't 100% from whole cloth, but the way you put them together is much more important than the ideas themselves. I tried (and failed, somewhat) with a story like this some time ago (Ecstatic Immolation). You've avoided the things I did wrong and have otherwise filled it with goodness.
I would urge you to make sure you don't fall into the trap of using the "bonding" to completely replace good, old fashioned romance. That's an easy trap to fall into, and it really hurts the story in the end. So far, you're doing a good job with that.You're my what?
(#) psycho1212 2009-06-26
great story.
about you a/n:
who cares if there's a similar idea, personally i'd treat it as a compliment really (only if it wasn't something that wasn't common) it shows a certain respect....
just thought i'd share my thoughts on it, give you an alternate thinking on using anothers ideas. i've noticed a lot of people seem to get offended cause of itYou're my what?
(#) GBTtown 2013-07-02
Comment on A/N at the end of Chapter 3:
A/N (I'm male describing fashion let alone dresses is beyond me. I know three descriptions, "That's ulgy, You look nice, and OH my do we have to go? there's a lot of fun things we could do here." Hint to any males reading this: only think the first and use the last sparingly.)
You left out, "No Dear, that does not make your butt look big"!
You're my what?
(#) LabRat 2015-11-27
In response to your A/N, I follow the mantra think the first, use some variation of the second, and use the third only when in a solid relationship that you've already explored a decently respectable amount of intimacy in.
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