(#) DoubleHeadedGuitar 2009-05-04It was totally awesome, you actually get the feeling of it like you're there with them and watching them, although is Frank really gonna die? Cause I've never seen the movie, infact don't answer that.
ANYwho it was awesomely awesome times 10 awesome.
Author's responseNope, I won't answer that. :D
Thank you so much! ^^
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-05-04You did Frankie's Perspective really well! Does that sentence make sense, i can't tell, oh well! Seeing you posted always makes me happy! Update soon? Please??????
Author's responseThank you, I'm glad it turned out well. :)
I'm working on the next update, hopefully gonna be a longer chapter but I have to go out of town tomorrow so I should probably get some sleep and not finish this chap tonight like I want to, lol
(#) nadialexandra 2009-05-04Okay, so I just caught up with this.
That was ... sickeningly sweet. I've just about fallen in love with Frank as much as Gerard has. It'd be heartbreaking to have him die again.
I liked that you added Frank's thoughts, too. It made him seem more real and perfect... if that made any sense.
Update soon, please!
Author's responselol, yeah, I can understand it being sickeningly sweet...there's probably going to be quite a bit of fluff in this one, mostly to screw with Gerard's head even more(and probably influenced by the fact that I've spent the past couple of months writing Dark Knight fanfiction and need a break from psychotic darkness, lol)
Glad I made you fall in love with Frank though! :)
Thank you! ^^
(#) tragicallyme 2009-05-05ah, this is so good.
I'm so tempted to just read the movie plot just to know what happens like 'thegayestgoth' but then I want it to be a suprise.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO.
Okay, well, at least I can tell you to update.
Author's response:) I'm glad I'm driving everyone crazy with suspense. ^^
Thank you for the review, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
And I'm actually working on chapter 4 right now. :)
(#) warwornlipstick 2009-05-28Damn, could this story get any better? Erm, I don't think so.
You do such a great job of getting the characters thoughts and feelings across, it's great.
It's still saddens me, though. How the thought of losing Frank still is hurting Gerard. :(
And I am tempted to see how the movie ends, because I have seen it before, it's just been ages, so I don't remember. But I'll let you keep doing your thing, and let it be a surprise :D
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