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• You're my what?

  (#) pacratjr1982 2009-05-10

  I have to say good story and keep up the good work. Now while I have thought of this before I also wanted to say that no one has ever thought to free Sirius the way you have well there was one story called "Partially Kissed Hero" that did something similar but other wise nobody has thought of doing it. I congratulate you on that otherwise brilliant piece of thinking.

• You're my what?

  (#) dhampirkinfolk 2009-05-10

  Yay! Topless Luna! All is right with the world.

• You're my what?

  (#) Cateagle 2009-05-10

  -chuckle- That's a beautiful line at the end, there. I'm quite appreciative of the way you freed Sirius, it's been used before but rarely and it's good to see a rational approach used. I can't say Harry's wrong in his rejection of being the "Savior" of Brittish Wizardry; they made their mess, they can clean it up; especially ALbus-0f-the-many-names-and-titles who neglected several early chances to change Tom Riddle's course or rein Tom in before he became such a major danger. I'm rather amused to see how this decision is affecting the various Weasleys; methinks Molly's likely rather annoyed that Harry's totally out of Ginny's reach now.

• You're my what?

  (#) dennisud 2009-05-10

  First is there room for a Lady Black? if Sirius makes harry his Heir? Luna might just be a good fit for it!
  
  ASs the chapter went I see more and more leaving Hogwarts including some Professors!
  
  Damn good story and I can imagine Luna's girls on her pettite body! (Wowza)
  ;-)
  dennisud

• You're my what?

  (#) DJ32 2009-05-10

  I never cared one way or the outher about Luna. But I have bin reading some great fics with her lately and this fits right in well done keep it up & thanks for writing.

• You're my what?

  (#) pi3142 2009-05-10

  I think you are doing well, but take the time to develop the relationships before trying to give Harry a Harem. Not many people explore the dynamics carefully enough - women as a nature do not share their mates! So moving Harry to France was a good thing so that you can get some quality time with the characters you want to use, but you lose that effect if you keep on trying to add too many characters.

• You're my what?

  (#) thekev 2009-05-10

  Really Great chapter, I look forward to seeing what you do with the rest of the story.

• You're my what?

  (#) gemini63 2009-05-10

  When did your Harry meet Luna?
  
  In canon, he meets her on the train ride to Hogwarts the year after the Tr-Wizard's tournament. But your Harry does not go back to Hogwarts, so he hasn't met Luna. Hermione could have, but not Harry.
  

• You're my what?

  (#) red_jacobson 2009-05-10

  Interesting chapter, and I enjoyed Luna's appearance, but are you going to be making this a Harem story?
  
  red

• You're my what?

  (#) Rob 2009-05-10

  Great parts. And nice to see Luna. But please don't go harem on us. Harry's not the greedy sort. ;)

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