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Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) juanjoseso 2009-05-22
lucius always been weak hiding behind a half blood coward who lies to his slaves and thinks he is not half bloodHolly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) paulblay 2009-06-15
This chapter is a bit slow. Not bad as such, but there's not much to set it aside from the original book.Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) LordSeagen 2009-06-30
I've just started to read your story. there are a view things which doesn't make secence to me. How come Holly and Harry aren't in the same year and why isn't Harry going to Hogwarts. If Holly is the same age as Hermione then why isn't Harry in the picture instead of being writin to in the journal.
What I've read so far is very good.Author's response
Thank you for your review! Keep reading; some answers come out further along in the story...
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(#) tricorvus 2010-09-19
Periwinkle Ponce - oh that is rich! Shall I send u my Dr bill for my ribs? In response to LordSeagan I think that Harry is going to another school, as he is in hiding. I love what ur doing! This is seriously good stuff!Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) Bronze 2015-09-12
Of course Holly's short for her age!! As with Harry, the ALL MIGHTY ORDER OF HTE BURNT CHICKEN NOR THE SUPPOSED SCHOOL MEDINURSE CARE ENOUGH TO CORRECT THEIR PROBLEMS!!! Then we run into the stone and reinforcing steel wall know as Dumbshit! He doesn't care whether either is truly healthy just as long as they can function to do what he plans for them to do! As the nation's highest law enforcement agent as the chief warlock he should make sure both children have a safe living environment but he WANTS them abused and seeing him as their savior.
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