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Intrusion 101
3 reviewsThings get serious; several crimes are committed, revenge is taken, and H&H have a bonding moment over their potion mishap.
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Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) DrT 2009-05-12
Whoa! Lots of seriousness indeed! It will also be interesting to discover if there really is a Holly Evans, or a transfigured HarryHolly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) tricorvus 2010-09-19
"Canoncansodoff" is a great name. That being said, this is a great story! And the details would make a lotta people blush. BTW - this is why I don't rub the bellies of my cats!Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) huntjd1 2016-01-19
I am enjoying the story so far. It is refreshingly different. the main thing that I would recommend you do differently is not to use initials instead of names. when you get several of them talking together it becomes more difficult to track who is saying what.
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