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Forbidden
(#) cutegirl12356 2009-05-14
I'm sorry to say this lol....but i love the whole frank and chey thing lol...AND OMFG! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I hope this don't end badly...Forbidden
(#) TheWorldiSaVampire 2009-05-14
Hahahaaaa! Thanks Reign! I definitely want a happy ending... but not your typical one. In truth, Gerard doesn't deserve Chey, it would be a lesson learned for his next relationship. Frank and Chey would be sweet but he's obviously married so that would be too much. Lyn is a beautifully broken soul... I like her so much b/c I played someone like her in a play I did a few months back, so it was easy for me to connect with her.
I just feel that you reap what you sew and even in fiction the outcome should be a fair one. I really do love this story... It's actually funny! I mean I genuinely laughed in some parts and I gotta appreciate that. I'm in a state of elation waiting on the next chapter... Update soon please!
xoForbidden
(#) doyleangel 2009-05-14
i'm so nervous for the next few chapters. I know that soon everything is gonna blow up. Chey's gonna find out about Gerard and Lyn, Jamia and Gerard are gonna find out about Frank and Chey, someones gonna find out about Frank and Lyn...a whole lot of trouble is coming...
update soon!Forbidden
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-05-14
great chapter!
i'm glad Frank and Chey didn't do anything more than kiss, but they make a damn hot couple!
right i am definitely ready for the next few chapters, bring it on!!Forbidden
(#) marcialj83 2009-05-18
I'm glad that tehy only kisses, but dammit I want Gerard to suffer for the shit he did to Chey and is still doing to her. She needs some happiness.
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